Seeing as he had a 400 Karma Rating shouldn't his soul shine like a star?

Interesting story though I will be following.

I’d recommend reading more books. Successful books have a lot in them that helps writers. Especially with clunky dialogue and obvious descriptions

Cheesy as fuck

Ich finde die Geschichte sehr interessant zumal mit den vielen Easter Eggs (Ignis Fatuu).
Ich hoffe es kommen irgendwann mehr Kapitel

Interesting, sorry to see that you will not continue this story

loved the chapter this story really makes me happy thanks

moar please

Brain. exe has stopped functioning, please pour hamon infused bleach over the eyes DIOnysus does not compute.

I haven't finished reading this whole story so I'm not sure if you still do this or not, but why do you always write "informations" instead of "information"? Informations isn't a real word. Information can refer to one thing or multiple things so it's uneccesary to put an s on the end. Not trying to be mean or anything, it's just I see this every few paragraphs consistently so I though maybe no one told you about it.

Id recommend deleting the past two chapters. Ever since you introduce the other player it has changed the MC's personality and actions. I'm slightly angry how you're throwing all the previous setup of a sneaky/mysterious MC for one who makes literal gods look like trash.

you do know shota means young boy, right?

spoken like a true demon, extremely shitty advice to give someone in the bottom of the socioeconomic bracket.

Good

The story went fownhill after the introduction of another player. After dungeon diving for a long time, then suddenly when hes faced with a familiar monster fromm Ygdrassil, his mana pool is low? Like wtf? Hes been throwing spells after spells with no care. Seriously?! Another thing, hes been hiding his race for a long time then out of nowhere he reveals that hes a demon. I dont know if hes just flexing or just plain stupid for a "strategist".

An intriguing start, but grammar needs a serious look. It's by no means unreadable, but the sentence structure is often wacky and awkward which is most definitely not aided by the typos and spelling errors you also have.