Reviews for Fractured
Mr. Wolfstar chapter 2 . 5/27/2018
Great Work. I read this chapter and SUDDENLY you offered me some inspiration; As such to write yet another story of my own. Here is the opening; “Mom … Dad,” Penny begin slowly, John and Maureen looked at each other, they could tell that their daughter now 14 was growing into a young lady. “I have made up my mind what I want to do as a career,” Penny continued, pausing. “Yes dear, go on,” her mother suggested. “I want to be a Zoo Keeper!” Penny offered with excitement. “That is wonderful darling,” her father, John Robinson answered, “As soon as we get to Alpha Centauri you can start your - new career,” he replied with a smile. “No Daddy, you do not understand, I plan on starting immediately,” Penny answered. Once again her parents looked at each other, this time with confusion. “But how sweetheart, we are going to liftoff in less than two week,” Maureen replied. “We certainly are not going to leave you … here,” John answered. “Certainly not!” her mother reinforced. “OH… I know, you won’t have too, The Keeper is on his way now, I will joining him,” Penny replied. John, nor Maureen said nothing; the shock of this news was beyond even what Dr. Smith could have offered. I have properly cited you for this. Thank you.
max2013 chapter 19 . 1/12/2018
FANTASTIC ENDING-LOVED EVERYTHING-THANK YOU! So, any chance for an update on West's World?
MoonWind Dancer chapter 19 . 1/12/2018
Loved this!
Yet, I am so sad to see this end. I have truly enjoyed reading this.
Thanks again.
anunrulywriter999 chapter 19 . 1/11/2018
No way are Judy and Maureen sharing their men, but poor Dr. Smith... oh well, i'm glad that everyone gets to live happily ever after, thanks for a great ending to a great story!
max2013 chapter 18 . 1/6/2018
Ding dong the witch is dead-So, a possible HEA except maybe for Smith as Earth is longer possible. Looking forward to next chapter.
MoonWind Dancer chapter 18 . 1/6/2018
Oh my!
Took a short break from my computer, came back, and this was the first site I came back to. And, am I ever glad!
Listening to Disturbed's "Indestructible", and reading some FINE fanfiction!
As Major West is my favorite, I of course loved these past chapters.
Now, cannot wait for the rest!
anunrulywriter999 chapter 17 . 12/21/2017
bye bye, Ollia!
max2013 chapter 17 . 12/21/2017
WOW-AMAZING-so now the robot is shutting down the overload-right?
anunrulywriter999 chapter 16 . 12/9/2017
(un) patiently waiting for the continuation, great story kiwikid!
max2013 chapter 16 . 12/9/2017
WOW-SO INTENSE-NEED TO KNOW OUTCOME NOW!
anunrulywriter999 chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
You've definitely caught my attention, now I must know what Judy's secret is and what plans are in store for the Robinsons! Great first chapter and I look forward to reading the rest!
max2013 chapter 15 . 12/3/2017
BUT, BUT YOU CAN'T PAUSE NOW-HIT PLAY!
MoonWind Dancer chapter 14 . 11/28/2017
Awesome! A new chapter, a new twist!
This is the first non-complete story I have read, so, kudos! You hooked me from the start, and it only gets better!
max2013 chapter 14 . 11/28/2017
BUT...I DON'T WANT OLLIA TO SUCCEED-PLEASE, MAKE DON GET OVER THE DRUG BEFORE IT IS TOO LATE!
max2013 chapter 13 . 11/18/2017
Ollia needs to pay for her crimes-a slow tortuous punishment.
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