Plz do orochimaru and anko plxz

Revive Yugao to little one! Lol

Damn.. I think this is the first time I've seen a fic where Yugao is mentioned and she dies.

Orochimaru now is not the time to crossdress!

I hope she gets her wish.

jesus christ shes a fucking idiot

dont really like the whole kill yugao thing but meh

I seriously considered to drop this fic, because the MC was so stupid. But I love how you kicked up the canon, and that I never know what will happen next, so in the end I read it in one go. Thanks for the chapters! :D

O_O *shookith*.
Shimura-Fucking-Danzo... That was an unexpected twist.
But really, it isn't exactly SUPRISEING, I mean, this is Danzo we're talking about.
But, wow, you've basically completely ducked up the cannon by now.
And I love you for that XD.
Because, darlings, this Konoha Crush arc is far more interesting then the cannon one.
Well, If (or maybe 'when') Danzo fails, yeah, there's no turning back.
I'm sure Shinigami-dono will welcome his soul upon the slimy bastard's execution with open arms! *
Whilst that's happening, I'll be cackling in the corner with sadistic glee~

Anyhow, Looking forward to the next update! Love the story!

I ship Kiyoshi an Sasa~
Except I don't know his age, so if he's too old for her, then plotonic love would work.
But that last part was fucking adorable!

Ohhh, shit is happening! I did NOT see this coming!

YASSSSSSS! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I really tried reading this fic but your MC is just so unlikable it's really hard to continue reading this. You have a great plot going on and your writing is great as well but your MC seems to be loosing brain cells progressively as the chapter goes on. In fact, your minor OCs from the gang are more likable than your MC which is ironic.
Yea she's an adult in mind but she doesn't think like one. Maybe she's trying to dumb herself down in order not standout but that hardly works if she's actually dumb in the first place .
On the other hand, your Orochimaru is very well written and creepy, definitely enjoyed reading him.
I hope you well in your future ventures as a writer but I'm sorry to say that I'm dropping this.

Hiatus? It's a pity.

It was nice while it lasted