this was a great chapter as always. the birds and the bees talk with Gohan was my favorite part and i was pleasantly surprised you tied back in to the breaking point that felt like a while ago. i understand Vegeta actions, he is so stubborn and so was easy to believe his actions this chapter. i think your writing shines the most with him and i always love reading the conversations between Vegeta and Bulma. also the lore you create about saiyans and saiyan pregnancies is great

Why are there so many double words in one sentence? Can you please fix that

Man I really like this story. Glad you updated it and sorry to hear you're planning to end it. Well I figured you'd end it eventually but don't look like you're going to do the Cell saga. Whatever you do is fine with me though. Look forward to next chapter:)

Oh yeah. I forgot about cell burying himself to molt or whatever years before the android attack. As he stole a time machine from a different trunks. The Cell Gohan kills isn't the same one from timeline or the main one. I truly love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter

little late to the show but its varsity blues

I like the layout of the story. It's different and because of the Confession room you can even get more of a feeling for the charcters.
The yoi part was a bit strange, mostly cause I like the DBZ couplesI'm still rooting for Krillin and 18), so I hope Yamcha will find an OC couple to have fun with.
I sometimes wonder how the media would think about the show. Most of the Z-fighters seem to be concerned about what their audience thinks of them but you never mention any headlines of Newspapers or anything. I was glad some fan stories got incorporated, to get a feeling of how the rest of the world is reacting to the show.
Looking forward how things work out for everyone.

Thank you for another great chapter!
I love your Vegeta!

i really enjoyed this chapter. keep it up!

Loved the new chapter! This story has it all lol. Please continue to write it. It makes my day and other’s every time. Cheers!

So happy your back, the Bulma x Vegeta love is off the charts.

This chapter is amazing

Terrific chapter. I don't know what to praise first so I'll just say that all the arc pieces fluff fighting slaves smut and explanations all where incredible

Just got to reading the latest chapter and in my previous review I've said that this is one of the funniest stories I've read. But, I must say, when you go serious in this story, it is really believable. It's rare to see a great dynamic like this. Amazing job! Thank you for continuing to write this extremely entertaining story!

I haven't finished reading this story yet, but it's the funniest dbz fanfic I've read (and I've read a lot of others). I love your portrayal of Vegeta especially. Thank you for continuing to write this. You've really entertained me and my friends immensely. Have a wonderful, happy day!

Now I get it why this story is not so well known or received those unnecessary M scenes, are that, unnecessary, and while the story is okay, I felt like dropping the story after reading the whole Yamcha x Bulma and Bulma x Herself, but I am not one to back off with this kind of things, so for now I'll keep reading, and maybe I'll catch up to the most newest chapter, that's it, if I don't drop it.