This is one of the best Michael Vey fanfic's I have ever read! Keep going and update soon please!

when you said you got a beta, i thought of a betta fish...

A little fast honestly, and Michael does seem a bit too calm to be in this situation. Then again it is an interesting read, keep up the good work!

Thank you so so much for updating! I love to see how the small changes in Michael's actions and powers start to ripple out

Give me more please! It's excellent!

Glad your continuing this story, real big fan of Michael Vey!

Even though you don't get as many followers as normal I hope you continue to work on this story and if you ever need any help just ask.

Major improvement! I like how you changed some things but kept a lot of the main parts the same.

This idea seems interesting, but since your writing is back to back it's hard to find a stopping point.

A good story if you continue it I will read.

May the Three Friends smile upon your path

Great chapter! I love the differences from the canon version. So are you going to do the canon shippings? And will you make up any powers for taylor or Micheal? Like idk taylor can control more than the electricity of the brain? Anyways please post again! Your doing great! Good luck!

So good!

What a great idea!

Can Taylor make an appearance?

You should continue