good chapter.

while i generally like stories about blowing up stuff and what not this is really good

Good history ;)

Good as usual. Though this chapter is kinda dull, since nothing really happened. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Nice. looking forward to reading more

You got C for effort(it's short).. and you got B- for the story itself(a bit biased, but NaruHina is canon, and this is fanfiction, go figure).. oh well, let's see how you write the next chapter, hopefully you got an A..;P

So now it's Naruhina now? (Sighs) I was hoping it was going to be something different and not like other stories but sadly it's like the many other crossover that always have to Naruto with Hinata. I know it's canon but not needed for crossovers. If you pair him with another girl that's fine but just Hinata it'll get boring especially after reading countless crossovers that almost alike. I don't have a problem with Hinata but in almost every story she revolves around Naruto like a gf or fiance that it's make the story less unique. I watched The Last but to me it was a big movie for fanservice in my opinion. I know you're a naruhina,fan but some people just want to read a unique story without canon pairings in it. But that's my opinion. Good chapter though just hope you could make it unique and not like others.

This story seems to be pulling a little too close to canon, i mean Sena trusts Naruto more so why didnt she ask him for swimming lessons. Also is this single pairings or multiple cause you have multiple girls (at least 4) wanting Narutos affection, yet it feels like canon where the girls are getting closer to Kodaka than Naruto. Idk man this is a good story but if you could pull a little away from canon, the scenes with Naruto and Hinata are good but if you could pull a little more away and make it an actual interactive story between Naruto and the other Characters like that scene where its Sena and Kodaka prior to this chapter talking about swimming practice, yet Naruto was just ignored even though he was 2 ft away from them was honestly kind of a disappointment.

Good chapter but again take some liberties and mess around with the story dont play it so safe by following canon plot add a little spice...also NarutoxHinataxSenaxKate come on make it happen captain

like XD

hmm not thd pairing i expected withwhat you insiuated with sena and yozora's inagination. i kinda imagined naruto with multiple girls

Why did sena ask kodaka instead of naruto cause you know hes a trained ninja and the fact i didnt see that sena would trust kodaka teaching her so im curious to say

see ya next chap

Loved the way naruto and hinata interact with each other. Keep up the good job

Great chapter x D Cant wait for more

Wait, so the pairing is NaruHina and SenaKodaka? Give Yozora some love man X'D

But well if you're adamant about the pairing, i would like Yozora to be a little sister figure to Naruto' or a daughter to Naruto and Hinata. That way at least Yozora got some love, familial love~

Keep up the good work!