Liked/favorited for the greatest Sakura pairing.
Then again, I'm liege-retainer trash as everyone knows.

That was amazing. I love it. All of the characters are remarkably in-character.

For some reason this needs a sequel of Elise in Hoshido. Other than that, I think this story is good.

It is a welcomed change to see a fates story that is independent of one of the three preconceived canons. I don't know much about the characters, but you do seem to write them well enough to be interesting. The story was easy to follow, you really set the scene well. Looking forward to what you are doing next.

I loved this. If you could continue it, that's great! It could be a really good re-imagining of Fates' story.