J’adore cette histoire, elle est génial. Il y a des moments très mignons et d’autres a mourir de rire bravo c’est très intéressant. Je suis désolée, mais j’ai du mal à écrire en anglais, je comprends à peu près quand je lis, mais je ne sais pas faire mes phrases en anglais.

PLEASE PLS UPDATE or is this the end?

Everyone in the garrison will absolutely think they're dating in the very close future. I'm giggling madly at his cute it is.

Fantastic writing: ) this is cute : ) poor Lance : )

Pickpocket Keith, what're the odds Iverson has a "Locate my device" thing and actively starts looking for it before they can do anything? I doubt they would drop the phone, but instead, one carry Pidge around to make it harder to find until they're done, and the other providing strategic distraction to avoid getting caught. Hunk is off to the side shaking his head at the craziness.
So, who else will find out Lance's little secret?
For some reason, I think it would be Matt. In the many efforts of Lance and Keith's stalking, he notices the two. He then notices somethings off about Lance. He thinks he's seeing things when the lanky earth boy gets elf ears. Try's to wave it off. It happens again. And again. So he goes to Shiro. Shiro thinks it's too many late nights. Matt doesn't and starts his own little conspiracy to find out what's going on with his boyfriend/not boyfriend's little brother "boyfriend".

I really hope you return some day and continue and finish this amazing story!

I absolutely love this it is amazing and i cant wait to read more!
Keep doing what you're doing!

Can you please come back? I'd love an update after 8 months

PLEASE RETURN AND WRITE MORE OF THESE ADORABLE BABS! Poor Lance just wants a friend (and more) with Keith!

I will wait for more!

Oh god it’s great! I love it!

60th review for you!
I really love your story~ can't wait to see what's going to happen with Matt!
I loved how Lance read the notebook and now can kind of understand Keith. Hope Keith will be able to tell Lance whatever it is that he wanted to, but couldn't find the words for. Though, with Keith's people skills it's probably going to be a long while...
Shiro giving the two of them the talk was freaking awesome!
I died laughing!

Please update its been so long since the last chapter

Amazing!~~~~~~~~

Thanks for writing on! I've read the new chapter with joy and I'm looking forward to the new one!