are you fucking kidding me I NEED THIS SEQUEL
Like, yesterday.
you write so we'll, it's fun to read and it have a really good pace(English isn't my first language, and I understood all very well, what's is a good thing to show that's is simple yet good). the only thing that became really annoying it's the drama on the dangerous moments. Like, "oh, look, they're trying to kill us! let's have a cute moment here, won't last long". I'm starting to think that's is a thing of you and your writing (I read the game one as well but I'm forgot the title, sorry), but this time was kinda annoying because would be better to appreciate without the danger you know? just make me think the characters are kinda stupid to do that on such a dangerous moment. it's a personal thing after all, and the only I can tell it's not the best. I love the shark-mermaid idea so fucking much, really. All the biology makes more sense than all others books with this theme I've ever read.
You almost get me on thinking Sanji was dead, not gonna lie. I almost cry.
And, after all, this ending is great. Those two are one of my best couples now.

I am literally beyond words right now. This is one of the best written stories I have ever read and I am straight up tempted to start right back over at the beginning! PLEASE write a sequel! i need to know what happens next!

this was aaaaamazing! please write that sequel!

very nice. the picture was well made too. v

So Sanji can't talk to fish either, but they are attracted to him... curious, interested to see where that goes. I am loving Sanji's enthusiasm about all the underwater life! And the banters and competition between the two is perfect and keeping to character. I had forgotten about the Noah! And fishman arc is my favorite arc so far! But you are putting in little easter eggs that I think are so cool! Sorry I don't have as much to say about this one, I actually read it late two nights ago in my bed and didn't have my computer with me to type up a review. However I wanted to continue to share with you the things I enjoy about this fiction!

Once again the bits of humor you put in just kill me! I love how you made sure to add that little gem about Sanji showing Zero which thing is which in the bathroom and that he is under no circumstance to mix them up! And explaining that although humans don't do well in large bodies of water, small amounts like the shower won't hurt him! Next point: my theory about Kuina was wrong! But I'm glad to see both her and Tashigi in the story! I've always loved both characters!
"Can you talk to them?" "Can you talk to land ones?" Brilliant way of putting that! I was curious about that too, and I am glad for the way you took this! I am curious as to Smoker's whole role in this. He's a bit of a toss up huh? Guess I'll find out!

Favorite moment: Sanji helping Zoro out of the bed, that had me in stitches! I don't blame Zoro for getting confused though!

So many thoughts with this chapter! First of all, when Zoro comes to see Sanji, and Sanji says that "Yeah. Hi. Breath while you talk dumbass" just imagining the semi straight face he said that with cracked me up! I read that line three times because I loved it so much! I got so much pleasure from reading all the different interactions between Sanji and Zoro, and later with the three brothers! That definitely made for some amazing one liners. Especially Ace being all suggesting with Sanji and Zoro! I also have a feeling that Zoro isn't the only one with the bracelet, and that Tashigi also has one and may be Kuina. (Although I've been curious about that being somewhat cannon in One Piece as well, because she's identical, coincidently loves swords and fighting with them, and I don't know. I'm tired.) There is so much I could say about this chapter that I loved. However I am exhausted from a long difficult week so I am going to bed. However this was a great end to relax me after a long day! I can't wait to read more tomorrow!
Favorite part of this chapter was pretty much the whole middle part with Zoro, Sanji, and the Brothers. Fantastic read. Absolutely loving it!

This chapter definitely had me on edge! I love how you have mentioned that most of the mermaids and mermen can only breath through their gills. And the way you demonstrated this when Zoro left water, fascinating and very well written. I absolutely loved the feeling of urgency I felt while reading that! And I was going to go to bed early, but now I need to know what this bracelet does, so I'm going to read one more chapter tonight!
Favorite moment has to be when Zoro got locked in the room, the response my brain had to that was quite the experience (I decided when I was a kid that the worst way for me to die would be suffocation by drowning, maybe that's why this scene resinated so much with me)

I was wondering if the two mermen mentioned were Johnny and Yosaku, it's been a long time since I've seen the early mangas, so I couldn't quite remember what they looked like, but clever quip with the swordfish mention! (I figured you need more reviews for an a fiction that at least I am finding very enjoyable and unique, so I'm going to do my best to review each chapter) I love that Perona is a jellyfish, that actually fits really well since they are very ghostly looking fish! Although if I remember correctly they aren't technically categorized as fish, I can quite remember 100 % though. It's been a long time since I've taken a biology class.
Favorite moment in the chapter: Franky posing for the security picture, classic Franky!

This chapter... WAS BRILLIANT! The playfulness between the two is so fun to read I am far more than just enjoying this fiction! I loved the names you chose for the turtles, loved how you mentioned that egg of information about Sanji preferring dressier clothes, and the detail you are giving to this fiction! I'm afraid I'll be up reading this fiction when I need to be at work at eight a.m. for a nine hour shift. But if I end up not being able to put this story down it will be worth the drowsiness tomorrow!
Favorite part of this chapter: Zoro intently focusing on the clock just to triumphantly proclaim FOUR MINUTES! I laughed pretty good at that and disrupted my dad listening to an audiobook!

First of all, this whole chapter and idea made me think of a series of pictures I had seen before, but had never been able to find the original artist. Then I saw you referenced a picture that gave you the idea, and lo and behold, it is the same series of photos I had seen! So thank you for inadvertently helping me find the original artist!
Second, I am so hooked on this story! I've been thoroughly drawn in! I love how you've characterized each person, and I am very impressed with the acronyms you've added, they work perfectly for the organizations you've described! I am so excited to read on, and I'm hoping we see some other strawhats as mer folk! I guess I shall find out shortly!
Favorite moment in this chapter: Zoro's reaction to Sanji trying to communicate! I loved the facial expressions he gave!

Awww! Thanks again for that wonderful fic! Even if you really got me at the beginning of the last chapter, I always thought: No. She couldn't do that! He is alive! laughs.
I know it's really sad to end a story but I am sure I won't be the only one who will reread it. And I would be really happy if you would write a sequel. Even if it takes some time. I love your writing style and the ZoSan Moments are so lovely and beautiful.
Hm... if Zoro is getting a human again... maybe Ace can explain some human things to him. smirks.

No no no! Don't do that to us! I know he isn't dead! He is going to be a merman? Or even as human he can't be dead!
Great chapter again. So much feelings and great ideas. Thanks. Waiting impatiently for the next one.

What a wonderful chapter! I love their reunion SO much. it's so lovely and awww... a really great chapter again. I also loved Robin and Zoro together. Thanks for going on with this fic!

This story is really awsome *~* i love it 3
I can't wait to read the next chapter