It was beautiful. You certainly did hit the correct notes. Like I said, beautiful.

Wow, this is so beautiful! Absolutely love your characterization!

I loved this. It's great seeing Ron be the insightful, empathetic one. And I loved the way you have him explaining this to Angelina. Great job.

Wonderful!

Wow! Good story!

This was melancholy, but sweet. I liked Ron looking after George, but still being gentle with Angelina. Yes, Ron would definitely know what's it's like to feel second best. The ending was nice, thanks for posting.