Reviews for Trinity Ascending
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 6 . 7/13
for the Rings? i have been calling them the Makluan rings. they are named such in the series "Iron Man: Armored Adventures" which follows a teen Tony Stark during his rise as Iron Man.

it is VERY different from most incarnations of Iron Man. in fact Tony's dad Howard is much closer to Canon Tony then Young Tony is.

now admittedly the rings are far more ornate in the show, each bearing a flame shaped gem on them with a different chinese character inscribed on each one, and each gem being a different color. they also grant the Mandarin a suit of black armor.

the race that created them in the show were called the Makluan. a race of lizard people who were your typical invading aliens. war loving conquerors.

but that is the only time i know of where a name is given pertaining to the rings.
jgood27 chapter 12 . 7/8
Love this story and can't wait to read more
rowenasheir chapter 12 . 6/17
Looking forward to the next update. What is Fury up to? Does he want NY destroyed? Is the basilisk HP cousin Jormangandr?
mizukikage chapter 12 . 5/26
Dang it! It was wrapped up in that!

Went for the next button and found none!

Looking very much forward to the next installment!
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 12 . 5/15
This story has potential, but it seems too unfocused. You've got at least two or three main plots to deal with right now, but it really looks like even more are coming. But more importantly, you seem to toss in a new crossover or set of characters every other chapter. It feels like a child trying to grab up all of the shiny new toys at once, even though they can't reasonably play with them all at once. A bit (okay, probably a lot) of restraint and focus would improve this story immensely.

Also, did you forget that you mentioned Tony having a vasectomy several chapters ago? He really shouldn't have had a kid after that.
Tales of the kyuubi chapter 12 . 5/14
Love your story so far ,and hope to see the next chapter soon. Now in your last chapter you asked for ideas for friends/companions for harry from dc/marvel. Here some ideas

X-23 aka laura howlett (marvel) Reason behind it is that well she was abused and trained to be a weapon. A very deadly weapon at that. Now I hope you bring in the wolverine in this story. Since he could bring his daughter/clone with him since I doubt he not want to visit an old friend and comrade when he hears steve is alive.

Raven . Rachel Roth (dc) I have to admit my knowledge of magic users is small from dc and marvel. However when going over the list in my head only two characters can work. One is raven and the other is Nico from the runaways. Still think Raven would work better as both she and Harry are not only demi beings ,but children of prophecy as well and would have something to bound over.

Kate bishop. (Marvel) Like with Laura she got an way into Harry's group through her connection to hawkeye. Now was uncertain of this at the moment. However seem to remember something about her being introduced throught the disney plus show so maybe something to not use if you want to go with the mcu version

John constantein. (DC) Doubt he would be a good friend ,but do think he could be part of the circle of your Egyptian demi goddess. Still since he from the uk the introduction should go through Harry. Can even be an rebel/loner at hogwarts

Donna prince or Cassie (dc) Think it be nice ,and so far had not suggested any front line fighters besides an way inside through Diana ,and can see her asking harry to show her sister or if you go with cassie student around in men world.
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 5/10
This seems great
shunshu chapter 12 . 5/11
wow I liked the chapter
krzys2000 chapter 12 . 5/9
Great chapter as always. Update as soon as you can manage!
I can not wait to see overprotective rady Thor going on rampage because Harry is tretened
godess bubbles chapter 12 . 5/8
woo another chapter!
nightwing27 chapter 2 . 5/8
a story I want to has a little cross over with star wars the knights will be based on knights of ren but not evil and the past female harry her bonded girls and the leader of the knights will go to the past one of the chapters will be called avengers endgame but unlike thanos tom will not have an army left it will be thounds vs 1 some of the new knights will be shocking lol but the avengers will be many dead wizards and witches back from the dead lol. the dead who was called by grindwald his army and tom and his death eaters so their death counts will reset to zero lol unlike others I don't believe in that stupid myth that its a bad idea to change the future
nightwing27 chapter 1 . 5/8
I like that story until the sequel came I hate where harry goes through another war after finishing the first one I'm glad the story spirit hunters sequel never contune going through another war again
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 12 . 5/8
More please:)
mwinter1 chapter 12 . 5/8
Awaiting more.
Charlie0925 chapter 11 . 5/5
Great writing here hon! I'm loving this and cannot wait to read more! ;o)
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