very good story I really loved it please continue soon I really have been wanting to know how it continues

There's nothing worse than disrespecting the character. Why want everyone to act like this so-called Alpha guy

Gohan is slowly starting to remind me of bardock woth a touch of broly movie gogeta not a lot just here and there

I would Say his Human Dna iand Upbringing is what makes him So Emotinal

Is Gohans human DNA becoming even more Recessive And making him act more like his agro sayajin side which is remarkably similar to broly(especially that last broly movie.) I mean it would be cool if gohan become more sayajin like progressively and that allowed him to access differing forms like an eventual SSJ or an eventual LSSJ broly type green tint hair form to differentiate him from trunks who you could give his rage form. Or would the change just be emotional and mental I mean I saw gohan for one of the first times ever to sayajin pride as a good thing I mean it would be cool if he wind up being the more sayajin like of the pair. Also are you going to ya e trunks be apprehensive about Gohans changes or perhaps would he see the more aggressive utilitarian version of gohan as reminiscent of his old master. Are you going to have trunks and gohan interact with different factions of the dc universe like the Amazon’s the doom patrol or the red lanterns ect? Overall I liked how you made gohan weaker without him actually being weaker it was smart.

loool

Great story so far, I like how your having them interact and how you are keeping Trunks and Goahnnfrom downright outclassing every opponent they face, it’s a good mix of them being as stony as they are and still being young teenagers who don’t know much else besides academics and straight head on battles.

This chapter was good! But when is the next update for other stories?

So gohans become a lucky for trunks. Lame

Is the sinthesized sayajin DNA having adverse effects on Gohans humanity since he was the only Demi sayajin that had the recessive traight of a tail that already sets him closer to his father’s race. Could his brain waves being abnormal mean he’s slightly more like goku and vegeta now or like his cell games agro self? Did gohan get a big zen kai from being injured to that extreme point? I liked how trunks took amore mature rought (he’s grown up in an apocalypse he had to be mature) to dealing with the team. Are the light/league of shadows ect trying to recreate things from theDBZ world. Also since you have blutz wave generator would that point to the eventual non god 4th form of the sayajin race being a long way down the road? I’m glad to see this story keep going.

Hex Wives

I never understand why the new Hero, dbz characters should explain anything to them. I actually started to hate the fact that in any fanfiction made story that the Justice League must immediately learn about him or her, their source of power etc.

It makes me feel like dbz characters make they self a lapdog or too funeral, too trusting etc. This makes me think as if the writer has no any other way than copying other writers by doing the same? They let use J'onn use his mental skills, or force their life story out of the Main character!

They let the Main character open themselves, yet never Batman or any other heroes besides their name, and sometimes not even that. You say, for trust, but where is the trust than from the Justice League. They keep that information hanging over his or her head.

Where is the action where Batman must do his work to gather information than getting everything on a silver plate in front of him, huh! This part is the only shitting thing of the whole chapter!
Apr 4 c3 gabelou1991 i found 11 fanfic like this and if got old to me. so please don't tell them anything and don't have them to join the Justice League or the justice league somehow force them to join them. That's what I hate about dbz x justice league crossover

Nice gohan is prolly going to get a nice big juicy zen ki from that. The androids getting the same type of boosts meta cooler got was a nice way to go about things. Overall this was solid chapter.

Man it's been so long since this story was updated, i honestly forgot about it to be honest, and i do have to say i enjoyed the chapter overall, but there were some iffy things for me like android 16 being taken, i would have preferred for that to have happen a little more later in chapters, but no point in that at this point.

I did enjoy the fight between the androids and superman but i felt he was made to be a little weak, granted the kryptonite caused that but i just felt he would have been causing them alot more problems in the fight.

But i like the references like it's hammer time and stuff like that, you literally have to have watched the dub to remember stuff like that, and honestly that put a smile on my face.

lastly for any other problem i had was the kid flash, I don't know DC all that well but shouldn't he be faster than the speed force making him much faster than gohan and the rest or is this a different version of him, Also love trunks having a personality, trash talking and wanting to achieve more power, but in my opinion i think he would act a little more calm and collected granted he has shown the personality quite a lot now that i think about it but he also gave those relax vibes of being cool and collected.

Besides that i hope they can be able to save Ranger and stop them from accomplishing their goals but you have to explain at some point just how dr. raichi is working with them, or how they came into contact with the big gete star and will they create an army with that deadly thing. How will they stop it and what can they do to find it. Hmm Maybe android 16 is faking it and is planning something to get more details about their plans.

I hope though we can get more frequent updates like every month or two at least that way it can be more engaging especially since it's been so long i have trouble remembering parts of the story.

Hopefully nobody gives you problems about gohan and trunks losing to the androids even in ssj2, besides if they say you made them weak i disagree if anything they were made to be more powerful and has way more skills like piccolo and besides it adds tension to the story.

Anyway i rambled on long enough, again great chapter.

P.S what are your thoughts on the new dragon ball movie XD.

Tye only few problems I have with this is 1: Putting 'Son of Goku' in too much. No true DB fan likes Kakarot. 2: misspelled, unfinished, and missing words.
And that's it. Besides that, it's really good, can't believe I haven't read this before.