Reviews for ¿Que has hecho Mephisto? |
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MelGlz24 chapter 2 . 7/25 This fic is abandoned? Or are you still writing on another platform? I really like it this! |
LaLocaSuelta8 chapter 2 . 1/20 uwu elegiría dejarlo sin ship pero solo es mi opinión. me encanta la idea uwub |
The Phantom-Otaku chapter 2 . 3/19/2019 The story has an interesting plot and I like the idea of Rin and the others needing to attend UA. But I doubt the others will be able to get into the hero course though. They have good abilities sure, but I don't think they'll be able to make it. The only one who's likely to get in is Rin cause of his demon powers. But I am interested to see where this goes, even if it's not likely that this story will be continued. Also, the dialogue gets difficult to understand at times. I would suggest that you use quotation marks for dialogue instead to make it easier to read. As for pairings, I think you should just not include a pairing. It would be better to focus on Rin and his interactions and how he takes in the world around him as he learns more and more about quirks. I also think it would be interesting to see how Rin reacts to being accepted by a lot of people since he is not used to people treating his powers as something good. I do not think this story will be continued, but I thought I would leave my thoughts here anyway since I do like this idea. |
InOuji chapter 2 . 9/17/2018 Oh yes un fanfic genial sobre mis dos anime favoritos ! Oye ,la trama es muy interesante ...espero que la continues en serio :3 por cierto , voto por RinShi |
rasengan7872 chapter 2 . 5/5/2018 Rin y shiemi |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2017 legal |
juliettacapuleto21 chapter 1 . 9/24/2017 Interesante~ |
Mercenaria del Sol chapter 1 . 8/15/2017 Oyeeee esto suena super padreee espero q actualices pronto, espero con ganas ! :D |
Altair7 chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 Si consigues que todo encaje este crossover podria convertirse en uno de mis favoritos. QUIERO MAS |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2017 MOORREEE! MAAASSS! |