Good story by the way but the problem is that i dont want the rest of them to join the division. For starters, the disappearance of two team will attract unwanted attention on beacon making Ozpin have suspicion on the related events. Second, that i think ruby and the rest are not even qualified to become agents because they have been singlehandedly defeated by an agent with 2 years of training. i mean, imagine if it is a seasoned agent, they even have difficulty with fighting jaune and they are seven of them, SEVEN, so they're not worthy to become agents. Third, is that they need to blend with the crowd. Seriously, they are sleeper agents, they need to act like a normal civilian, Weiss is a big no because of her status, this also applies with Pyrrha. Rwby and Yang will probably stick out like sore thumbs due to their personality, and dont even think about Nora. Ren, i think is the only one who is normal enough but he's too weak to even defeat a Rookie agent. The fourth is their even not ready to take a life or kill. Their conscious is too weak to handle at killing their kind. Killing a grimm is alright since it is a beast but killing a person is another story, their mind are already troubled having thoughts of that, what if they actually killed one, they probably been traumatized because of taking another soul. Fifth, i think the second option is the best, like imagine, if you could forget anything by choice, whenever its good or bad. This is probably the best choice that is given to you and this will help Jaune to be under the radar and can focus more on his objective as an agent since nobody remembered him at beacon, well except for the staff and teacher. After all, ignorance is bliss. And lastly is that the lack of experience. i mean yeah sure they are soon to be huntress and huntsman but the sheer lack of experience is what seperate the agents from the division, they need to have a clearer idea on how to survive on a society-collapsed placed, for example, adaptability, they need to be able to adapt on situations, may it be conventional and unorthodox, and remember that they are fighting humans not grimm. Fighting grimm can be conventional due to their shared tactics, people on the other hand can be very clever, they have the thing that is what we called mind or brain, and they can use that mind to make things very complicated. Another example is survivability, they need to use every single variable for survival. Like scavenging, barter trade, craftmanship and many please reconsider that the option to make jaune's friend join the division is a BIG No-No to me. I know that you maybe thinking that this is rich coming from me but hear me out, im also an author, but not on this website apparently and with the lacking of fanfics like this, i want to help you on making a better story.

Thats all thank you.

Good story and no don't let them join

Yupp this one is a lot more better then before,you're focusing more on the plot and Jaune character development rather than awesome and badass he can a really good change can't wait for more mate

Not much of an agent is he? I've counted about 9 fuck ups in the past few chapters.. Don't miss lead your readers xD

noice.

Blake should be going to prison for her crimes. It doesn’t matter if she used to be part of the White Fang she was still part of it and committed terrorist actions. Her new actions do not exonerate her past. As a government official Jaune should view her as one of the bad guys.

Please say you are working on another chapter!

Just found this today, and gotta say, i want more. Great story, keep up the good work

Jesus fucking christ! I wish there was a better version of this with just the rwby and division elements in it. What the fuck are these cringe inducing shit you put into this.

Aura teleportation and aura contructs(exclusive to schnees) wtf are these?! Hey dip shit instantly making a overloaded op protag at the start of the story makes your story go fucking stale(salvageable if you have any skill in writing plots and character interaction, skills you don't have!)!

Why couldn't you just stick to the theme of undercover soldja boi jaune in beacon pretending to be weak. Then getting called by the division, so he decided to use the letter(he thought of making in the off chance he gets attached to any body and have to suddenly leave) that explains that he has to leave because he was called by his parents or some other BELIEVABLE excuse he can think off! Then he tries to save the city. Team nrwpbyr kinda gets sad due to jaune leaving, but they get over. Blah blah blah.

I'm disappointed by the forced reunion arc btw. All that lame ass chapters that was supposed to be the build up for the cathartic scene where team nrwpbyr accidentally sees jaune, just ugh. Disappointing. It's severely lacking.

Your dialogues are fucking pathetic btw. Its Like some kind of stale harem manga or isekai op protag light novel bullshit level. Don't stick to those kinds of literature, mate. You'll rot your weeby head off.

Another thing. what the fuck are you doin jaune?! You're a sleeper agent! Dont they teach you how to keep your shit secret until its time to use those secrets?! I mean really? What the fuck is this light yagami bull shit you're pulling? "Putting paper and wedging it in between the door blah blah". For cryin out loud , you're an agent! Don't just put secret shit into your closet thinking "oh yeah, my closet, perfect! What was i thinking? That's where i should put my secret military stuff, behind this flimsy wood door! To think that i was going to use a safe." The secret you keep is military, classified as fuck! For sure they would've told you to keep your high tech shit to yourself and teached you how to hide them.

I was hyped tho. Just got to playing division again and decided to look if there's a decent fanfic, sad to say i still haven't found one.

Ypu made me cringe to death, you fucking chaloopa!

Don’t have all of them join, honestly don’t have any of them join it makes it cheap like anyone can get in and considering he took them all down on his own without killing them means they’re not to division level.

Hey man great work with the story. After reading the last 2 chapters and doing some thinking I just realized something cool you might want to add.

It may be impossible for Pyrrha or Weiss to become agents. Reason being their social status. Their worldwide celebrities or well known figures so the chance of them becoming a covert operative capable of blending in with the crowd and hiding in plain site such as division agents are just couldn’t happen.

Either way, keep up the great work

Hey man, glad you're back! Good to see ya going on on this story.
I like the way this chapter was written, same with how you're going to write an op with Jaune and the RAINBOW team. Personally I still do got a question wich will somewhat correlate to the different hostile factions going about; We got Looters (wich is obvious), Rykers, but what I really was wanting to ask; Will the Cleaners make an appearance? It could still work, not with how there isn't a virus around, but with the Faunus and their sympathizers. Or in reverse: White fang prowling the streets, acting as the Cleaners towards anything non-faunus or not falling within their views.
Anyways, t'was just a suggestion, don't feel the pressure of implementing it into the story as-is.
As for your remark on if you could implement parts of other games in the Tom Clancy's series; How about some remarks to Wildlands? Game's got plenty of content.
Anyways, I'm glad you're back to updating this story and I look forward to future updates.

Regards, Max 'Sprocket' Colman

I hope to see Ren and Nora soon.

Yang, pyrah, Nora, and Weiss I could see as frontline division agents but I think it would be cool if ruby worked in the weapons area (as some sort of support), Ren as a medic, and Blake as a sort of recon/ spy for the division due to her understanding of the white fang and penchant for stealth. Just my opinion and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next.

I think that team RWBY and the rest of team JNPR joining the fight is a good idea. After all, teamwork is their greatest strength (with Jaune included), the 8 of them should be nigh unstoppable.