Oh my god.. this chapter was awesome. I couldnt tear my eyes from the screen and almost missed a bus stop xD

I can’t wait for the last part. These are some pretty writing skills! Whoever you are, you should definitely try to make this a side job!

Rereading this story after I stopped last year at somewhere around chapter 20. I cant wait to finish it this time. This chapter is a masterpiece haha!

this is literally one of the most awesome Talon/Lux fic ive ever had the fortune to read. it's long and the smut is *chefs kiss* belissimo. your writing skills are amazing. this is literally just wow

That was... an enjoyable second half of the chapter... does feel like my mans was a bit of a quick shot with that ending but still... enjoyable...

Hey there
This. Thing. Is. Awesome ! When I saw how long the story is, I couldnt believe it to be still in work. If you want to further continue this masterpiece then DO IT. F*ck lore accuracy, this here is the new lore. Whatever you had planned, go on with it.
I hope my few wordscombined with the positive stuff the other readers are hopefully sending to youare enough of a pep talkKeep going and don't mind rito, the created star guardian urgot xD
Torn Wings Rising

Definitely not the Talon I expected, but nonetheless one I kinda like now.
Can’t wait on how you end this long journey.
Don’t tell yourself that you won’t write anymore! The good thing now, if you want to start a new story, is that everything from now on in league story is canon and will not be changed!

ErikderFreak

Does that mean this story is over? I haven't read the new Talon story. Did they just change his last name or something? Either way, your story doesn't have J fit to their lore. Make your own universe, girl!

Great chapter as always. I really like the way you wrote Swain's coup d'etat against Boram Darkwill, highlighting his magnificient bastardy.
The old lore did not specifically state who assassinated Boram, but details and the old LeBlanc' story suggested an concerted action between Swain and LeBlanc against the Eternal General, while framing Demacia as the culprit.
Regarding Decius' upcoming illusionist trick, I am not sure if it is even possible. Firstly, he is not exactly a mage, at least in your universe. Secondly, manipulating an illusion and making it walking and very likely conversing in a few hours requires strong concentration, and the feat is even harder to complete when the illusion travel farther from the mage. I would see an ancient sorceress like LeBlanc do it without exercising too much effort, but for Decius... very unlikely.

Just a heads up, the newest story is Kat's Bio and Color story just from Talon's perspective. We are still getting a color story and Bio for Talon by the end of the year.

Please don't stop writing, your work is so good and it can exist without being totally Canon. that said I understand if you don't want to.

With that said this chapter was really good. everything was just really well done, from decius plotting something, to the summoning, to the duel.

Dear god. This chap made me shed glorious man tears. I feel no shame.

Well it seems i cannot provide the aforementioned example because certain characters just disappear when the review is posted but its your story so write it as you will, and i will read it all up haha

Hmmm my last message seems to have been botched haha and as far as i know you cant change reviews so lets see if it will work this time, i think you should put dividers when perspectives change to help keep the flow of the writing. Examples i have seen is putting lines in between perspective changes like the dashes line

Mmm yes, I sense bloodshed about to occur. All the plots coming to a close. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the rest.

Despite reading the story from the moment you wrote the first chapter, I think this is the first time I write a comment on this story, but I just have to now!
The Tale from Decius was really great (I know it too from my childhood) and I think it had a perfect fit there.
But even better I’m kinda happy that Talon is about to do something really cold/dark again.

This chapter just was perfect again!
(And yes, I would kinda like to read about how Darius sliced through the whole tribe)

Greetings from ErikderFreak