This was a really great read, the Rachnera X Kimihito pairing is one of my favorites and it's nice find a story just about them. Great work.

Oof... noice

Noice

One of the best romantic fanfics I have ever read, you have done an exceptional work. Good job.

Aboit halfway done. Yeah, the law is such a kill joy... except when being married is made legal. ;)

Kimihito is into legs. Doesn't matter the type. ;)

You know I have not read many of Musume stories but I can say this. It's nice seeing one of them about Rachnera. Spider-women _-.

Got me tangled up in a web of a good story, nice work

When another chapters?

Nice finale to a good story. I hope you plan on writing more Monster Musume stories! I would love to see one of Kimihito & Miia, another of Kimihito & Lala, and Kimihito & the MON Squad Girls (Tio, Manako, Zombina, Doppel)! We need more of these stories and pairing. I wish you the best of luck on future MM works! And I cannot wait for the final chapter of this story!

Great story thus far! Would love separate stories with Lala, Miia, and the girls of the MON Squad. Those all have my vote for future stories, which I hope that you will write in the near future. Keep up the great work!

Kept an eye on this fic from the start and I thoroughly enjoyed it, I'm kinda sad to see the finale nearing. On the other hand I may be (ever so slightly slightly) squeeing happily over them finally tying the knot.

Story elements aside there were a few typos and odd wording that snuck through, but keep on keeping on, I have a feeling your gonna keep improving! (also a sequel sometime down the line or spinoffs in this style with the other girls would be very much appreciated *hint hint*)

Anyway, thank you for the fic, I have a feeling your writing is only going to improve from here and its provided no small amount of warm fuzzies and entertainment.

Great chapter and great setup for the final chapter. It was nice to see that this nice story came back.
Now I'll be anxiously waiting for next chapter, in the meanwhile I'll probably check your other stories to see if something catches my attention (your Dragon Maid fic already did)

Until next time, and thanks for continuing this :) (and sorry for the late review. I'm writing this after the 2nd read, which took me a while because life.)

Been loving this story since it's a second for a non-harem Monster Musume story as that Kimihito-Lala one (Squad Bravo) is the first (I think).
Deadman Wonderland's manga is great. The last fifteen chapters are a rollercoaster of hype. There are also several differences between the manga and anime, such as existence of side characters.

Ignore my last review I saw the name of the chapter and assumed didn't see that there was no complete marker that's embarrassing.