I'm gonna say it wasn't a dream and that Derek and John make this up for the family

Holy shit. It was a DREAM? Damn didn’t see that coming.

this story sucks, i dont think stiles is the cheating type, which he does because hello braeden! also, the way you portray stiles and derek, their actions dont make sense to me. just ... nope, i read it because i felt like i should stick with it but ... yeah i am giving up at this point

So stupid. The ending and the story in general. I only kept reading because it was like a train wreck I couldn't stop no matter how much I wanted to but I felt myself die inside everytime I read a chapter.

Liked it

I like how you wrote this.

I can't believe it was a dream, but it was a great dream.

Jen

Not the ending I was expecting...I really like this story... and it's sad that it had to end this way...but you're right... this could be a beginning to their story. Thanx for updating. Hope you're feeling better!

Hey are you gonna finish this story?

Please update soon :( - Can't wait to know what happens next...I really miss your stories ;(

I miss this fic so much! I really love the concept and the slow burn. I hope we see more of jealous Derek who doesn't really get why hes so jealous!

Stiles must be strong! Derek must learn that he has to respect and cherish Stiles...

I like how you wrote this chapter.

I just wish it had been a little longer but that's okay.

So, Derek still wants Stiles to touch him but not like it was before.

So, I liked the part where Stiles say "Derek I want to be respectful", and Derek says "You are. It's ok, I want you too. I'm asking you to touch mee", and how Stiles froze in his spot in how sure what to do, and Derek says "Stiles just wrap your arms around my waist, shut your eyes and relax against my form", and Stiles says "Fine, you're so stubborn and I like that Derek says "As are you."

Eventually something is going to happen them between them and I think they only way they could be together is if Derek asks Stiles Dad to unadopt him, because that is the only way they could be together.

Really liked it

Liked it

Hmm... I wonder whats gonna happen now between the two. How long is this gonna last with them just acting like brothers only? I wonder...