Mr. House and Q working together?

Oh the chaos...

Brilliant

Thank you for this story! Its such a joy to read!

Ohh thats a twist! I wonder how this will fare. This ks the first time I ever seen Jaune and Ren being partners.

I love Soul Transmigration stories (Reincarnation) They can be some of the most interesting stories to ever grace my eyes and this is definitely interesting!

I'd rethink where you've gone with this story, at this point it's so over the place that it just jumps from one kind of scene to another with no meaning or relation. "Suddenly, fights happen. Suddenly, his sister wants to kill him because she's a part of an random and poorly-explained OC-only shadow organization (Donut Steele) that can curb stomp anything in their way. Suddenly, he gets training from his family and wish-fulfilment-story level armor and abilities."

Again, I'd rethink where you want this story to go, because right now you have no control over it.

That was pretty stupid of jaune to challenge pyrrha. He wins, that puts pyrrha in last place, with no guarantee that his team will go to the tournament. He loses, and he can't challenge anyone else for 3 days, and might not have enough time to get in top 12 before the last week is up. He should've challenged lower, and all 4 team members would be in. He could have shown pyrrha how much he improved in a private match later.

"Darling, I am worried for your life. You have no basic training whatsoever; your body is not conditioned to fight these beasts." - Just once when someone writes shit like that I want Jaune to be like "Yeah? Well who's fuckin' fault is that? Maybe the family that wouldn't train or teach me?"

What's this "jaune ALMOST beat an alpha Beowulf," huh? He definitely beat it. If I remember correct, he cut it open stem to stern. Neck to crotch.

So first of all you say jaune knows how a woman wants to be treated because he used to be one. And then he's all "*gulp* I'm supposed to treat you like a queen because you're a girl? Really? Uh oh.." Don't really like how that played out, should be one or the other, not both.

...what’s the point of making Jaune go to beacon to make for a name for himself that isn’t, “just another Arc,” when you have him get dragged back into his sisters’ influence and shadow regardless? Now he IS just another Arc.

This story is so weird tbh. To many variables no info about any of them. Half assed explanations along the way and tbh really weak asf character development.

bitch ass protag, funky af story too. Level up then write bozo. Can't wait till you read this again in 3-5 years and cringe.

This is awesome! I look forward to more!

That was great!