Reviews for A Day on the Beach |
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parasiyte chapter 1 . 7/14 fucking sick |
Celcees chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 Well that was interesting. Fairly well written too. |
Ranma-sensei chapter 1 . 8/23/2017 Surprisingly poetic piece you've got there, and not at all what I expected; keep it up. As for storytelling: It is a little on the compressed side, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing; it lets the reader use their imagination to fill in the blanks. There are a few errors here and there, but it's pretty clean. All in all, while this isn't my usual fluffy fare, I like it and will add it to my collection. Keep narrating, Ranma-sensei |