ALLURA YOU RACIST LITTLE PRUNCESS SHUT YOUR QUIZNAC

I need more, this is so dramatic I hope when they go to the future Keith is the BoM leader and he hesitates to help them a bit and instead avoids them while his Long Lost Sister deals with the Paladins trying to keep them far away from him but fails the Paladins ask for his forgiveness and from there on I don't know what will happen but I hope something dramatic yet comforting happens in the end

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I need to know what happens next even though it is 2019 I hope you will carry this on even if you are not interested in continuing please do I'm interested to what the end will bring. . err I mean next Chapter
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this is a good premise and start, but i gotta ask why Keith would want to go back to Earth. he has no one or reason to go back, and considering which episode you've started from it would make more sense if he stayed with the Blade.

Need update!

Pls update!

This is SO good!

Awesome start! Omg, Keith's going back home, I wonder what he's going to do.

Can't wait to read more!