Is this story dead?

Nice! I read your other series first and then this one. This is great work, however! Keep it up! And will the villain from the movie be the same one in here?

Why hello again, Notifs have failed me and I forgot to review, but I can tell you I am still alive now. Huzzah.
Alright, this is pretty good! I always feel like Ash gets the worst of it so often though. But hey, he’s Ash freaking Ketchum, a little fall won’t kill the kid!
... right?
So when describing Ashy here and how dead he looks, it feels a little repetitive, constantly saying he looks “near-dead”.
Now they gotta be super careful when moving him, alright, cause my mom broke her ankle as well. She had to get surgery, but let’s hope Ash doesn’t need that.
I also noticed you really only described his outer appearance and how he looks. It could be a bit better if you added things like “quick, erratic breaths” or “cool, sweaty skin” and stuff like that. Describing just the injuries can be good, but adding the reactions/results from sustaining such injuries can add more to the “corpse-like” effect.
Just thought I’d point that out. Looking forward to more!
-JAS

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Nice chapter! Ohhh mystery!

I have to question whether or not you plan on killing these kids in every story you write.
Although I have to admit, you have me hooked.
This is a really neat story, the characters are well written, I'm getting the "Good plot" vibes, and I'm seeing no grammar, punctuation, or capitalization mistakes. The way the scenes were written make sense, unlike quite a few other stories i have read.
I look forward to more of this, good luck!

Yikes! Ash sure took the wordt out of the four of them. Hopefully he’ll be fime soon.

I hope Scrappy doesn't end up as the bad guy again, I mean can't people let go of the hate for him.

A very interesting chapter! Hopefully the villain is not Scrappy Doo.

Your stories are good, but you should have a friend double check them for grammar errors.

great chapter and well this is gonna be "excuse me for using this word here" 'hell' or hectic for a better word i think

Oooh, just as good as ever Wanli. I am getting really excited for this!

Its nice to see you kept your word XD, even if Itwas a little bit late

great chapter and oh boy i remember that movie, this is almost the same thing isn't it but with a king now huh

A very interesting second chapter to the new story! Hopefully the team could be working like a Team when the matters get intense.

Good start. And if this story follows the same timeline as the Ghoul, Specter and Puppet Master, then Mystery Inc. will be pretty surprised to be reunited with some old friends.