it was good. although it was a wonky start, with the mob chasing, council, etc etc. I couldn't help but love Tayuya and Naruto. The quality was getting better and better every chapter. I'm just pissed that you abandoned this fic like THAT!

naruto literally has zero complex thoughts.
This is the most 1 dimensional character I've ever seen.

come back too this story

Ton of cliches in the first chapter, but for a first fic this is remarkable.

chased my murderous mobs chased me out of this fic ,didn't even need to finish the chapter *sighs

What an amazing story man, I truly love it. amazing writing, great defining of emotions and atmosphere. You are really an amazing writer man, keep it up because I cant wait for the next chapter!

Your summary is ripped from Battlefield 1 Epilogue. Am I the only one that noticed?

This story is amazing and I do hope you update soon

Other than the relationships, this has been a really good story. Hope to see it continued one day.

So this is one of those stories... Nevermind. Not my thing.

A suggestion? This story has no emotion in it. Maybe do something about that. Good job for a first, though.

You advertised on the reddit and here I am.

Sooooo...we got Naruto being chased by murderous mobs. Strike one.

We got an all powerful council that can apparently tell the Hokage what to do. Strike two.

Finally we have Naruto, a ninja, wandering around with a Katana. Yep, strike three, and I'm out.

If you decide to start another fic. Try not to literally grab some of the most annoying, most overused tropes in all of Fanon eh?

Naruto being chased by a mob for a beating...I've already lost all interest.

I seriously hope chapter 26 comes out soon the tension of this chapter is just to damn suspenseful

just... why? what sadistic pleasure do you gain from doing that? fuck this. I hate tragic cliche bullshit, especially the lover death one. Why can we have a story that isnt so emotional. I was good with all the killings, but you just had to pull that cliche. the thing that puts salt onto the wound is that I can relate with Naruto the same ting happened to me with my lover dieing... I am still crying over that sometime... I am gonna go and cry myself to sleep now good night

Gaara's transformation felt kinda cheap. I know Naruto's therapy justu is top notch, but that's stretching it a bit...