Not half bad, man. I lol'd when you made Souzo his big brother. He has two younger siblings in canon, are you going to use them? Or his parents? (His mother canonically died, though.)
Not too many fics are yaoi, and most that are are Saito/Sano. Not too many Sano/Ken.
You ever going to continue? I'm not a huge fan of modern verse for this fandom, but this sounds very interesting.

Dude. You HAVE to finishe this! i'd love to see more! This is really interesting!Come on? for me? :;tries to use the puppy eyes of doom, and fails miserably:: Please? Anyway! See ya around!

-J

T_T...I hope you continue! This is a pretty cool start - different and original. _~

Oh I can't wait for more! I hope you update soon!

I like this beginning, and as always I love your style. I'm interested to read more.

May inspiration be with you!

oh. . .a ghost story. . .this could be fascinating! and of course, I'm glad that someone else picked up on the fact that Sano sees ghosts. . . _ I can't wait to see where you take this. . .

FarStrider

Wowzies! That's an interesting beginning to say the least. I love ghost stories, so I'm definitely going to look forward to this ficcie of yours.

Great beginning. Will the next part be coming soon? Please?

_~

Chiruken

. . . !

Yay! I'm so glad you published this! *wants more* But you knew that already. :

looks pretty interesting! So Sano can see 's nifty. And that last line.

"This time, time it's different."

You've got me wondering. Just who is he going to encounter, and just what are the pairings going to be?

*throws in a bet for Sano and Kenshin*

Okay. I'm interested. Can't say much other than that yet. I'm curious as to where this is going. I look forward to the updae.

~Fitz