When are you going to update?

this reminds me of that one Ghost Hunt fanfic where John Brown gets abducted by a psychiatric ward cult thing and one of the patients kills herself after being stuck in a silencing room by using her teeth to gauge open her wrists. It's morbid, but really interesting that people can go that far. Like, you'd think the pain would stop them, but when you're that far gone, nothing matters anymore. Scary.

this whole chapter was accurate. completely.

LMAO.

I just-

LMAO.

HAHAHAHAHAHA.

man. and he thought dying by puddle was bad. XD

- and the dream in the dream that wasn't actually a dream because time travel was totally a thing now. -

and now he's gotta wait another 8 months rip.

I don't know why but the dark tone of this fix is captivating, I wonder what's gonna happen to Keith next

*screams*
THIS IS TOO GOOD I LOVE THIS BOOK TOO MUCH

Hey I’m not complaining about another chapter :3 I can’t wait for Wonderland :3

Oh geez poor Keith is so... I don't even know how to describe it. Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to see more!

oh my staaaars. . .
That was so good!

oh my staaaars...
That was so good!

Awesome! I can’t wait for the mext chapter of Wonderland :3

Keith is my favorite character, this story is phenomenal, it's got to be the best thing I've ever read so far on this site and I can't wait for the next chapter. It's official, this story has me hooked!

This is some good shit

...we all knew it was coming
we all knew as soon as he latched onto this that it was gonna come and bite him
but...fucking hell that was harshly done
he forgot so much of what went down, and avoided the Druids and Christ did the retaliation for pointing out that going to Galra HQ like that was a bad idea hit SO much closer to home with his depression and...and I don't even understand what actually killed him, just that it was probably because his trauma is distracting him, being triggered by all sorts of shit...
this has got to be soul-crushing, and I worry how he's going to behave next cycle...if Shiro was picking up on the depression a bit towards the end of this one, I doubt Keith's gonna be in a position to hide it any better after that shitstorm...
like holy shit that lifeline-rope analogy went far in demonstrating his mental state...too rope-burned to grab ahold of the lifeline again, huh? shit man...this is not gonna be good...