Loved it, I would love to read a sequel.

Oh wow Bella did it. Good for her.

There must be something wrong with me, but Jaspers death was perfect. I cannot believe he killed Charlie.

I lost count of how many times I've read this. But I have to say I'm a little peeved. I don't think you skirted over the rape. Has you said Bella was drugged and can't remember it. And Jasper is a total prick so why would he even think about what he did. I feel a true fan fiction reader wouldn't give up.

Great story

This is just fueling my already well established hate for Jasper-I generally don’t like him... then I met Jackson and he was a douche canoe to the extreme so... fuck Jasper! And I’m not loving Carlisle playing the fence and helping him. I’m feeling pretty skeptical about him now. Are Ed and Em adopted good?

For me this is right up there with some fic legends
There Will Be Blood
Quiet Storm
Operation Kill the Swan
Killa & Bee

I just think it was great and in the end sequel or not these two have a special place in my heart.

Holy Duplicity Batman! Edward is Marcus’s son. Damn. The Cullens are a feckin mess. And this chapter had to happen because Bella’s exit from the force had to be challenged but why did they do that stairwell so late in the game. That was a close one.

WTF?

I loved it! Bella’s moment behind the desk. Her speech. And mostly her swift deliverance of justice. Well done indeed!

I agree with Bella’s preference for killing Carlisle since their marriage is public after her resignation they will be watched and as much as he deserves Jasper’s level pain they deserve the peace a quiet natural death will give. And what about Esme? What a mess.

Hell yeah you are working this story honey. Cheers!

Okay why does this feel more like Carlisle making a point vs. Caius and Marcus. It’s just the whole “getting your attention” comment. Also, taking Jimmy's phones. Let’s go back to Carlisle’s freak out phone call about Jasper’s missing and the senator to Edward. He is unusually attached to Athat fuck up. Anyway, I guess Edward will tell us.

So like father like son. Gross. So is poor Jimmy dead and if so are they going to try and take Kaitlin because she’s a descendent of Aro’s. Which is bullshit. Why not just kill Jasper at birth and then Aro and Jane. Giving him to Carlisle then bringing him into the fold later is a crazy plan. How is Renee involved? Is she the woman who visited Jane 20 years ago? Is that why she’s dead? On and side note...Carlisle is sick. This is exciting! ;-D

Hey do they have other men working for them besides Jimmy? I’m glad they have him but they don’t seem to have a larger crew. Why does Alice care where Jasper is anyway? They have an odd relationship. Why does Senator Brandon want that for his daughter. People and their power obsession *shrugs*And if Carlisle wants to call the shots then he should instead of passenger seat driving all over Edward. Thank goodness Edward and Emmett have each other.