Reviews for Diary of Time
KRusHII chapter 17 . 6/13
If Prof. McGonagall took Crabbe and Goyle away from the courtyard to the point where no one could hear her berating them, then how did they get back in time for the Incredible Bouncing Ferret Show?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/12
Kewl? Really? How can I take any story seriously when you have a character say "Kewl" unironically?
Acidflame chapter 31 . 4/16
Killing off Luna? Low blow author, very low blow.
Acidflame chapter 12 . 4/16
I'm really bothered by how hermoine is acting on their date... I mean the lad almost choked her to death during their first year... And now they're kissing and being sweet and shit. Wews
lemon-rind chapter 1 . 3/30
Good job! I read up to chapter 4 so far, but it won't let me review that chapter for some reason... But I wanted to say I enjoyed the premise before I continue on. It's good to see Harry grabbing some exercise and trying to improve his life :)
The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 2/29
I’m confused. Your description doesn’t pair Harry with anyone. But we know that Hermione has been termed as ‘companion’ and he was pointed to Susan also.

So will Harry be paired with Hermione, Susan or both. I hope both. I call that Osseous Harmony.

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 2 . 2/29
Harry’s an enigma to the staff.

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 2/29
Intriguing open. Old Harry give young Harry good advice at the start.

I’ll be seeing where this lead, I’m already hooked.

TGM
Raymondjay41 chapter 42 . 2/7
Still one of my all time favorites
Alpenwolf chapter 42 . 1/15
Quite a story and everyone is happy, apart of Dumbles. ... But who cares about Dumbles. I sometimes wonder about his Vision of the Future, or how he wants it to be. ... Every Death Eater and more suddenly seeing that what they do is wrong? Including Voldy? Pff, not gonna happen. Terrorists are gonna dealt with, harshly.
Kris chapter 42 . 1/12
Very enjoyable!
Guest chapter 30 . 1/9
Didn't zambini die
Guest chapter 25 . 1/9
This is kind of bugging me. Old Harry potter had a good life but was sad that so many people had to die. And yes Dumbledore was manipulative Harry should be angry with him. I never thought run was a good friend either. But the rift with the twins, his over reaction to Hermione and yeah he saved Cedricbut he's an ass. I don't believe the book is necessarily making life easier it seems to be turning Harry into a jerk
ladybird chapter 42 . 1/7
Blah! Middle-aged Sirius and two under-age girls? How perverted can you get!
BaddieDZ2 chapter 2 . 12/20/2019
Wowzers... oof.
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