YeS RWBY! I LOVE YOU LANCE! !

I’m freaking crying. Great job!

Awww... poor lance and keef... but what Keith said at the end was sweet

Aww poor keef!

I really love your writing but I’m just wondering what happened to the chapters like 19. It made it kind of hard to read but I did it anyway .

I am loving where this story is headed. I am excited to see how the next chapter goes. I have always enjoyed stories that go back and tell past snidbits to make the the present time line more interesting and in-depth. :) I can’t wait to read more thanks for all your work. Sending good writing vibes.

Fantastic writing: ) I can’t wait to read how they fix this: )

Ahhhhhh this is so goood

I am living for this story. Please, do not let this story go! I implore you to continue it! Excellent fic thus far! I’m eager to see how Lance and Keith finally come together as boyfriends, and what will be the catalyst for the split between Lance and his girlfriend that makes it all happen!

Oh the feels : ) fantastic writing: ) perfect ending for this chapter: )

wow, just wow. its amazing where its going so far. i cant wait to see how it turns out next.

Ohhhhh angsty boys. Update soon!

Fantastic writing: ) can’t wait for more: ) poor boys it’ll get better: )

It was beautiful. I wish that I had a person like that to have anchored me like that during attacks when I was younger. It would have been nice to come up from the deep pits I fell in sometimes to a warm smile and a soft hug. When I was younger the attacks I had were ignored, pushed aside, or worse they told me it was all in my head to get over it. Its nice to get to read a way to can be if you have some one to hold your hand in the dark.

please, tell me there is more of this right. I've been reading this since the beginning, but it cant just end on a cliff hanger like this. please finish i must know what happened.