This was one of the first fanfics I ever read, it stayed in my mind because of the chocolate conversation, Takeru dying, and the song quote at the end. I cried so bad when I read this back then. Today, for some reason I thought about it again, so glad to see its still around!

An amazing plot and storyline, I love how you had it turn out (My favorite part was the knife scene).
I just don't like the way it looks, not as in you have bad spelling or something, it's just it looks... Iffy, or something, I just can't place it.
I love it, I want to read it, and if you revised this (If you haven't, you should) I would read it again.

Oh my gosh I loved it! Poor Matt! D:

that was a great story, just great! I loved it!

So everything in this was perfect 3

My heart melted

Damn. XD
This fic pwn'd! :D
... I wasn't expecting TK to be like that when I started reading, though. xD
In the end, this really was a Taito fic.
Much awesomeness. 8D

YAY AT LAST A LONG GOOD STORY I LIKED IT A LOT THE PLOT IS VERY UNIQUE THE ACT OF INCEST THIS TIME IS NOT OUT OF LUST FOR A CHANGE THE ONLY THING THAT FELT OF WAS THE PERSONALITY OF TAKERU IS FAR AWAY FROM WHAT U HAVE SEEN IN THE SERIES SO I FELT LIKE U R DISCRIBING ANOTHER BROTHER WE DONT KNOW OF TAHTS ALL HOPE TO SEE MORE OF UR WORK AND TO SUM IT ALL

I LOVED IT

very different, but good

i loved ur story, it was abosolutely amazing. u have a great story developement and plotline. fantastic, abosolutely fantastic

that was twisted...i loved it! two of my favorite pairing, Taito and Yamakeru Although i must say i didnt think Takeru would attack Taichi first...well, it was a great story!

...whoa...

i could never ever imagine takeru as a violent person...

Very deep and well written story. I enjoyed reading it very much.

this was an awesome and sad story. oh and that song at the end of the story. its a song by Jessica Simpson called "irresistible". i luv that song.

aw, that's so sad! this is so good! and so long too! but the longer the better!

hehe,can't wait for that fic you're working on, sounds fun!

YOU KINKY BASTARD! YOU SICK FREAK!

I believe that the song you are refering to is by Jessica Simpson *shudder* How do I know that? Any way, That was an emotional rollercoaster. I enjoyed it quite a bit.