Ha loved it hope theres more!

THIS is the kind of mod story I've been looking for. No more 'my friends and family' angst every 3rd line. It's great! I can't wait for more!

The first thing that really sticks out to me is you have a big issue with your Capitalisation and a couple typos. I can't remember all the rules, but the main one is whenever you end a sentence the first word in the following sentence starts with a Capital letter. I would suggest trying out grammarly (its a free app that checks your grammar) as it could take care of your typos and small issues pretty easily. As for the story itself, pretty good and I guess you are trying to go for a slightly insane Harry as that is the feel of the story. TY 4 the chapter!

Good to see this story back again

This was great i thought i had seen them all.

Oooooo! Eeee! I love it! I can't portray it in text so you'll just have to imagine it. Probably only a little less than the amount of glee if you saw a Dwarf of Hobbit in real life.

This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I like it.

Thanks for the update
I'm happy to hear that you are not going to abandon your story

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

I'm on the edge of my seat.. Waiting forever for a battle scene that will never play out and a story that will never be completed.. I'm in tears.. Hope you are doing well..

I laughed when I read this the first time, and still laugh when I reread it. And The problem is it's not funny when you don't update the story and it makes me cry because it's really good.

And as usual, I need you to update this interesting story..

please, continue

This is an interesting take on the immortal Harry Potter thing as well as an interesting cross over with the Lord of the Rings I would like to see more of it sometime in the future.