Good chapter, but how did Roman almost die to Taina? And how did America cover up that travesty?

One of the more interesting stories of R6, I love that this story goes out of the norm for other Fanfics, and decides what its own world is. I have been reading a lot of Fanfics, and this is one of the better out there. Keep up the good work and I hope that you don't get a writers block, cause this is too good to be let down.

Great rework can't wait for the next chapter

Good shit, bro.

That was amazing! Can't wait to see more.

Alright, this was an excellent introduction the reworked story, just as expected. Was this worth the wait? Absolutely yes! I can’t wait to see what else you have in stock for this remake man!

happy birthday

I'm kinda confused here... Did Roman killed João or did Miller killed him?

Wtf, why can i only see the first chapter ? Did you delet the other ones ? Or am i just dumb rn...PLS HELP

hey man, loved the chapter, you did really good with the scene of the sisters, really emotional, but i do think you rushed the last part of them hugging, don't get me wrong It was good, but a bit too fast, maybe another round would have been enough, also i don't think i said. this much, but i see you over use the "as" and when you narrate someone like when you did the Vigil/Blackbeard scene you said almost everything in present but when its a thought It has to be written in past form, apart from that It was really good, and remember to always re-read the text It will make you notice mistakes, also take your time writing man! really good job! hey man, loved the chapter, you did really good with the scene of the sisters, really emotional, but i do think you rushed the last part of them hugging, don't get me wrong It was good, but a bit too fast, maybe another round would have been enough, also i don't think i said. this much, but i see you over use the "as" and when you narrate someone like when you did the Vigil/Blackbeard scene you said almost everything in present but when its a thought It has to be written in past form, apart from that It was really good, and remember to always re-read the text It will make you notice mistakes, also take your time writing man! really good job hey man, loved the chapter, you did really good with the scene of the sisters, really emotional, but i do think you rushed the last part of them hugging, don't get me wrong It was good, but a bit too fast, maybe another round would have been enough, also i don't think i said. this much, but i see you over use the "as" and when you narrate someone like when you did the Vigil/Blackbeard scene you said almost everything in present but when its a thought It has to be written in past form, apart from that It was really good, and remember to always re-read the text It will make you notice mistakes, also take your time writing man! really good job

The best R6 fanfic I found so far. I trust the reworks will make it even better cause I agree with your points.

I really enjoy this story. I would like it to also have a little more to do with the relationships and the other operators possibly a mute x dokkabei. You are the other so write the story to as you see fit I trust your ability to write better than mine.

Hey mate you do what gotta do alright, I'll still be here supporting whatever you gotta do.

This is actually a nice idea, getting all chapters done before actually publishing them. I also noticed some chapter names are inspired by Slipknot songs which is a nice touch imo

Are you referencing Slipknot in the chapter names?