Reviews for Break The Plot
TekoloKuautli chapter 2 . 3/14/2018
Not-Ginny is a surprisingly unlikable character, I mean, I get it, she was shoved into the body of a character with a fixed 'Role' to play with no exist whatsoever because it's her new life. It obviosly creates multiple pychological problems, for one it's not her life and feels she is usurping the original, second she doesn't want to be a marionette, third detachment from every other 'person' around her because it doesn't feel real? In short she is screwed up in the head, no wonder she ran away as fast as she could, must have been suffocating her. However she also suffers of not being able to plan throughly and giving herself away too easily (the argument with Claws about his warning of making enemies fell flat on her mind), honestly I couldn't find a good thing about her at all, selfish, cowardly and hasty. Didn't even seem to enjoy her new life anywhere except for the owl shop (cooing at the owls), expanding on her good traits can only do good because right now she's a brat that needs a thrashing.
TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
Wow On the one hand I feel bad for the Weasleys', on the other yeah her only options are to play along and be dragged into the 'Role' or die trying to change it. I mean, Harry marries Ginny in the books (never saw the so called attraction between them to be honest, more like hero/knight worship on Ginny's side and Harry picking her because she was the closest to what having his own family would be like).
But what about the other horcruxes and keeping Fred alive? Not begrudging her for wanting her own life but she must have felt something deeper for them?
Bloody Constant Writer's Block chapter 2 . 9/29/2017
Ginny is a cloud?
Serene Amarbel Asteria chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
Here's a new idea with a new premise! I'm looking forward to it. However, it would be a great boon if you could get someone to clear up the clutter that's gathered around misspelled words and harassed sentences.
There are parts I cannot make heads or tails of due to this admittedly aggravating problem. I reckon the story would be far more interesting than it already is (if only due to the premise) with good grammar and well-checked spellings.
Snickering Fox chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
You typo-ed
-'with' into 'whit'
-'calm' into 'clam'
-'to' into 'too'
And word 'save' is usually used like 'saving people', and for that particular paragraph I think the right word is 'safe'.

But overall, this is good enough. And I really like your tropes lol
rianifitria chapter 2 . 9/4/2017
Novel idea, but can be better in execution. This chapter barely makes sense, there were too many errors. Please spell check or auto correct spelling... I mean 'made' not 'bade', 'lifeless' not 'live lees' etc etc
xxOchibixx chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
Interesting story plot! Just make sure you proof read or have a beta to edit your story. Ex: Whit?~~ with, incorrect usage of their and there.
Iris D. Peverell chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
Ohh, this is new, i'm going to love read how you will do with this story, is so very different from the others, is appears to be very funny.