Great story! I hope there will be more chapters to come!

Mirai will fight anyone to get to the main plot and im loving it

AHHHHH! I am squealing internally! Pleeeeaaaseeee give us a new chapter soon~~~ I a d

I really like this.

rereading this fic and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa so good!

I really hope this gets continued (it's been a few months and I'm afraid it'll be discounted, even though it probably won't) and boy do I like Mirai.

I like his personality so far, and the fact that just by being different he has already changed the timeline is great and something I don't see a lot! (I'm low(high)key hoping he ends up with Light tho, like romantically)

I like this story, male OCs are rare and this fanfic is all ready amusing.
I'd personally prefer if this doesn't turn into a Yoi or whatever, because fanfics don't need romance to be good stories. Also L and Light would not get a boyfriend, that would be OOC. Also Misai doesn't seem like the type to create Romance in the middle if a battle between moraly constipated geniuses.
Anyhow, can't wait for the next chapter!

This is great! I love what you have so far. I can't wait to see the changes Mirai will bring. I do wonder about the changes he's already made, I wonder why the robbery didn't happen this time? I can't wait for him to meet L (not gonna lie, I'm hoping this turns out to be LxMirai, but even if it doesn't I'll still read it). I hope you can find time to write more for this! As much as I love your other DN fics, I think this one interests me the most, because I'm curious where you'll take this with Misa being a male and an SI (although, Bastille is a very close second). Thank you for writing and sharing this with us, good luck on your writing!

slowly reading through all your DN fics, and loving every single one. i hope you will return to continue this one! i can only imagine Lights and Ls reactions to meeting Mirai... so glorious

I'm a HUGE fan of Twenty-Three Percent, and I stumbled across this budding adventure just now!

I am really excited to read more!

-Lovely

i love mirai and i want to know more about him. why is he so ready to die in order to kill people? how will he interact with light? i'm v excited to learn more about who he is

Such an interesting beginning! Does that mean that Mirai will be Light's senpai :)?

it’s pretty interesting,

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I forgot that Misa/Mirai was older than Light XD