| Reviews for Clouds in the Sky |
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   TillyTulip chapter 11 . 6/23 Your fanfic is great! I just love the flow of the story and the plot twists and stuff! I swear you are a genius! I hope you can update soon and stay healthy and be well |
| Pein's number 1 Girl chapter 11 . 6/9 This is so good! I really hope you come back to this I wonder how Misturu is going to react to Asahi saving him. I also wanna know if Misturu is gonna go on a rampage when he's free. I'm sure that'd be a sight to behold. I have so many questiooooooons |
| 1SL4ND3R chapter 11 . 6/8 ... what the f*ck just happened? Whhhhaaaat? I’m so confused lmao. What’s Asahi doing there? Bruh my mind is everywhere. This chapter was a hella ride. I don’t even know what to think lol. Keep up the good work! |
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 11 . 5/14 It was a good chapter, I will look forward to the next update! |
| Slaggedfire chapter 11 . 1/23 Story ruined. |
| Tribble.Chan chapter 11 . 11/8/2019 Mitsuru learning that he isn’t the biggest fish in the ocean is certainly hard, but I’m sure he’ll become even stronger after this incident. I’m curious now on what Mitsuru’s relationship with the canon Nagi/Chrome will be like... I hope Mitsuru doesn’t join Asahi’s group. Asahi might not be the total spoiled brat that I assumed he was, but he still grates on my nerves. Happy holidays author sama! |
| 00Chup chapter 11 . 11/3/2019 oh wow, that's a painful learning experience. Thank you for sharing |
| AzureLazuli chapter 11 . 11/1/2019 Ooooh, enjoying this story! :D |
| Crainium9 chapter 11 . 10/31/2019 Oh hey wow would you look at that another great story ruined |
| NotYourDamsel chapter 11 . 10/26/2019 I both wanna cry and laugh and goddamn it this is soooooo good! |
| ACasualHuman chapter 11 . 10/26/2019 This was fucking awesome. So many people dead but Asahi had that fucking TIMING XD Thank you for the chapters! I hope you continue to update! |
| Hope10032 chapter 11 . 10/26/2019 Haha, gotta love a good update. Take your time with the next one, but I will be waiting for it. Mitsuru is such a good character and I like how you’re exploring his current level of strength. Like yeah, he’s got prior knowledge and the blood that flows through his veins is the same as some of the most powerful in history, not to mention he’s actually been trained and such, but he’s still a kid. He needs time to grow into more power. Overall, great story! I was able to guess who betrayed him, but I didn’t guess the upstart sun. Now it’s time to see whether Asahi is there to join Yoshida or save Mitsuru. Although, I’m not sure how he would’ve learned about the kidnapping except through his delinquent friends. Hopefully his desire to get Mitsuru to join his group outweighs any desire to join Yoshida. And I just love that you are making Mitsuru fight off Sky flames. I’ve always wondered about Skies who forcefully bond their elements to them. Anyway enough rambling from me. Good job, and I look forward to the next update! |
| Viviene001 chapter 11 . 10/26/2019 Wtf? O.o No, seriously? Hmmm... Oh, I was just wondering when Mitsuru will go raging. Mitsuru might not be all the shit, but Yoshida wants him because he is strong. I think he should’ve at least had a token effort haha...but ouch, the kids are dead. :( I wonder if Mitsuru will ever bond with a sky after this... hopefully not jerk Yoshida. |
| Viviene001 chapter 10 . 10/26/2019 Ohhhhhh my god no Mitsuru! Something also tells me that fon is going to obliterate someone. |
| Viviene001 chapter 8 . 10/26/2019 Ryohei? I didn’t get any mail motifs until your recent two so I kind of screamed happily xD |
