I LOVE this! :3

Awwwwwwwwwww~! Nice!

I actually spit out my food in laughter when Ash thought, 'so he isn't my father'. I mean it's hilarious really. I was expecting this to be like others, probably with Red as Ash's father but it wasn't! Which is great, let me tell you I like this headcanon waaaaaaay better.

Than you for this awesome fic!

While this is only a short one chapter, the emotion that weaves through the words can fill a whole novel. Excellent read!

Beautiful. I loved it! Many thanks!

This is quite nice. Good writing

That was so sweet, I like how you explained them being brothers. Nice ending, too