Reviews for Together (Ice and Fire)
Guest chapter 17 . 7/18
Im glad you never delete it just randomly found it and im glad i did. It was beautiful even better than the last season. Im heartbroken that it stopped but i get it. I will always treasure this even if its unfinished. Thank you for this amazing piece of art that you shared. You are such an unbelievable amazing writer and dont ever give up on writing no matter of the haters that keep you down. Much love -Addy
ShadowedDarkness1230 chapter 16 . 2/6
Omg. Don't listen to the haters. You have written an amazing story, and I am glad you didn't delete it. There will always be people in the world putting down your writing. It is just something that happens.

I highly recommend you just get used to the hateful reviews and focus on the positive ones. You have a talent, and as I reviewed earlier, your scene for where Jon found out his identity was the best rveal scene I have ever read. Well done.
ShadowedDarkness1230 chapter 12 . 2/6
That was the best identity reveal scene I have ever read. Well done. It summed everything up well, and lead into Jon accepting his identity more readily.
ShadowedDarkness1230 chapter 17 . 12/15/2019
Respect to you. I understand how you are feeling. I have written multiple stories, and all of them have received negative feedback almost more than positive. I will say, none of my stories are near as good as yours. What your readers need to understand is that this is an AU. That literally stands for ALTERNATE UNIVERSE. Of course characters are going to be OOC, that is the whole point of an AU.

I love your story, and hope that a few hateful reviews won't drive you away from writing when you clearly have talent for it.

As a suggestion, if you wish to continue writing, I suggest you write on Wattpad. I have written parts of eight stories on it, and have yet to receive hateful comments. The downside is less people will read it because it is a less known site.

Keep up the good work, and just know that you have a natural talent...
Rosalie chapter 1 . 6/19/2019
This is the only Jon/Dany show i can find with DD/LG elements. Jon was a horrible boyfriend to her in the show, I love Dany and want to be loved the way she deserves. I also love DD/LG relationships (when done right) makes me feel safe and I want Jon to be manly and Dany to be loved. Hope you want more stories like this for these characters
SnowyOwlGoddess chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
Ignore those assholes who call your story bad, they are just people out to annoy you. I absolutely love this fanfic and would love to see more, this one is rated among my favorites and I have been searching for weeks for a good Game of Thrones fanfic to bury my disappointment in Season 8. Keep up the amazing work and, remember, most of those who criticize your work are all bark and no bite.
Kandy Kane chapter 17 . 6/4/2019
Hi,
I found this story as someone looking for something better than what we saw on TV in Season 8. I have not been disappointed. Well, other than finding out people are assholes and I won't get to see the end you were leading to, which I can already tell is 100 times better plotted out than what's TV Canon now.

Let me see, critiquing... I thought you captured everyone's voices well. Thank you for writing a Season 8 Dany that we were expecting. Well, I was hoping for this version of Dany. I think it better subverts expectations if she's not just the mad queen but whatevs. *Show dig* I LOVE that you're writing Sansa learning how to fight, and its logical she's better with not a sword. Given all she's been through, learning to defend herself should have been the first thing she wanted to do for herself as Lady of Winterfell.

And lastly, people's apparent vitriol, Jon was pretty on brand. Him avoiding Dany and brooding over finding out he's Aegon is now canon, so fuck the haters? I rewatched season 1, he's totally a little shit; pouting about this for a month is on brand. He said "you're telling me, my father, the most honourable man in Westeros lied to me my whole life?" What a mind fuck. Talk about a nuclear bomb into your life. Which is a long ass way of saying, I thought his reaction was realistic and especially learning the AOTD is trapped at the wall, he has time to work out his feelings. And a big THANK YOU for handling Dany finding out better than they did on the show. I hate that show Dany is always going on about how she was "born to rule" no you were not. You're third born and like, 6th in line. And a girl in a totally totally patriarchal line of succession. *Sigh"

My only real negative feedback is, why doesn't Jon call her Dany? I guess it's show canon, but it's the only thing they did right. Ugh, I just realized you stopped before we got your Rhaegal/Jon meeting. Eternal sadfaces.

Thanks for the wickedly enjoyable read. Sorry about people.
-KK
FiveFootTwo chapter 3 . 5/24/2019
Oh my goodness. This was just amazing. And just what I need after that horrific finale. This is what should have happened on the show. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
diamond2225leo chapter 17 . 5/14/2019
I'm sorry people are assholes but I really liked the story
Guest chapter 17 . 5/2/2019
I just found your story, it’s so beautiful, please continue
CarterMulligan chapter 5 . 4/8/2019
this whole time im thinking dany is knocked up and im like how did tyrion know?! they dont even know! but he meant cerseiii...riiighht
Guest chapter 17 . 4/3/2019
I'm really sorry to read this. People suck so much and I am so sorry. I hope you find the will to write again, because I thought you wrote beautifully. Sending good vibes your way and I wish you the best. xx
CarterMulligan chapter 2 . 4/4/2019
and it was goats! not sheep! boy... that was a scene ill never forget
CarterMulligan chapter 2 . 4/4/2019
youre a fucking genius. im only on chapter two and you have captured me in the same way the show did. im drawn in. im so fucking impressed- you NAILED the characters AND the scenery! i can just see her dragons under that moon light. i can just see tyrion talking and talking, and no matter how annoying it gets you have to listen because the little fuckers usually right. i almost dont know how im gonna react to the new season airing after reading this... i could go on for hours about all the things i admire about your writing. but it was a sheepherders daughter. dragons killed a litrle girl to get locked up.
Guest chapter 17 . 3/18/2019
Just to let you know, you cannot please everyone. As long as you’re not hurting anyone, you need to do what makes you happy. There’s always going to be haters in life about everything. Those assholes don’t care about anyone but themselves. You can’t let others dictate your life. Grow some thick skin, life lessons should teach you that life is full of jerks no matter how a great person you may be. Anyways, loved this story, wished you’d finish it... good luck
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