Love this! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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I can volunteer to be the beta reader I don’t mind and I have slot of time in my hands

what the heck is actually happening the first chapter said he watch DBZ and he is able to make inventions base from the anime, and in the second chapter he is a saiyan or atleast not human . You didn't mention his tail in the first chapter, now he has it in the second.

Nice

great chapter, ps if you need a beta still I would happly go over it ;)

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Cool story

Great so far, but would like to see an update soon, it's almost been a year.

please update!

Dude, you need a rewrite and then a beta. First off, if he was already on gravity training then ANYTHING All Might would do for him in terms of physical training would be small potatoes. If Deku was already during training taken from the DBZ universe then he might not even need One for All and he certainly would already have the physical conditioning necessary to wield it without any extra physical training.

Saiyan-Deku with OFA Quirk in one full package? Hurray!

Fox Boss if you look at the way it is written it is saying the said saiyan blood it that diluted the tail and other traits would not be able to show apart from the ki manipulation which in dbz any person is able to use

First person point of view ruined the story for me. I find it annoying and can't enjoy the story I find 3rd person's point of view more enjoyable. Keep writing and do not let the grammar Nazi get you down.

Not bad, but if you're going to make him a Saiyan, shouldn't you give him Saiyan traits, like a tail?