That was cute. And yes, I get what you mean about Ochako and Thirteen both having a similar "space" theme.

Simple and sweet. Great read and great setting. Thanks.

cool.

KAWAIIIII!

Oh ... your stories never fail to bring a smile to my face. This was adorable. Kyaaaa! So KAWAII ! I love these two too much

That's some cute shit. The world needs more one-shots of these two.
I like how you managed to hit a lot of different story / relationship points in their conversation on the Ferris wheel - her folks, their goals, life at U.A. - but didn't get too bogged down exploring any of them. It's an easy trap.
The bit where she starts listing all Deku's nice qualities is a little blunt; I think you could improve it by showing her thoughts with actions.
There's a typo of "wasn't at him", where you meant "wasn't at home".
I hope you write more. Let's give these cuties some more fun moments!

My daily IzuOcha fluff, this is what I lived for!

This was too cute

Glad the idea came in useful for you, I'm happy that it helped. I've had a read through and I like what you've written, so I thought I should give a little bit of an in-depth review as a 'thank you' of sorts.

First of all, the positives: I thought the dialogue flowed very naturally. You have a knack for writing simple dialogue in a heartfelt way in pretty much every IzuOcha story of yours and every line the two of them spoke felt genuine. The emotion came across just the right amount - sincere without being overly melodramatic - and the reactions of both Midoriya and Uraraka felt very in-character.

The set-up was a good one too, with them sharing their feelings on a date being a good way to initiate the conversation without it feeling forced. The setting of the theme park also worked nicely to ground the story and fits well with Uraraka's bubbly personality. Even the descriptions worked nicely, enough for a reader to visualise the scene (and to get across Midoriya's slight feeling of being overwhelmed by the colours and noise), but not intrusive to distract from the actual plot. It blended into the background and allowed the characters to be the focal point, which is definitely a plus point.

If if was being really nitpicky the beginning was perhaps a little disjointed - it felt as though it took a little while before the story really kicked into gear and a lot of the rides get covered in just a line or two. Maybe having slightly more detail put into Uraraka and Midoriya interacting around the theme park and their reactions on the different rides would've helped, as currently it's only really the break that they have and the ferris wheel where they have much in the way of interaction, but I realise that you wanted to keep it short and it's only a very minor bit of critique, nothing to stop the enjoyment of the fic.

Anyway, minor suggestions aside this was a fun, well-written little story - thank you for all your hard work writing it and I'm really looking forward to seeing your next IzuOcha fic. If you're still interested in getting some ideas, I'd be interested to see your take on how they would handle a situation where they have to compete against one another (eg for a UA test). Having the two of them be rivals whilst still caring about each other sounds like it would be a fun scenario and I think it could work really well with your talent for writing the dialogue, with both of them torn between doing their best and not wanting to upset the other. If it doesn't grab your imagination then fair enough, but if you would be interested I'd love to see what you come up with!

Awesome chapter
Charachters where on point
And the way they behave really feels like a real coupel that' s just startend dating and i LOVE it
I also really like the setting you used
Have a Nice day you sir deserves it :)

God Bless and Keep you and yours

So cute and fluffy! I love the pace and the setting. You've really captured their personalities well and I love how we get to see both of them through the other's eyes. I hope you'll write more pieces like this!

Ahh that was soo cute! I loved it!
Your writing is really good and i love how keept them in character, verry good!
Thank you verry much!
Cant wait for more.