Brilliant. I almost never read fics of the Romantica couple but your plot grabbed my attention and it was romantic, dramatic and educational. I understand that seeking professional help is best but you have inspired awareness of seizures.

Do you plan on making a sequel? It would be interesting to see how Usagi handles Misaki having a seizure now that he knows they happen.

Omg I've wanted to read an actual descent story for a long time now but they're so hard to come by so thank you. Also don't worry about that commenter saying you stole another story yours is probably better then theirs anyway.

XD this is such a ripoff of the history of normal from suburban sprite :p you copied!

Hmm I have to say that this was quite the interesting premise. I like how you were able to use Misaki's injury as a way to bring the couple closer together. It was very sweet of Akihiko to take such precaution when it came to dealing with the seizures.

Fuyuhiko acting guilty is always something I've wanted to see in the actual manga. He's constantly such a manipulator and we rarely see any emotion in him besides snarkiness (if that's even a word). The way he acted in this story just makes me curious as to how his relationship with the couple will end up as at the end of the manga. Definitely an interesting thought.

I had missed your writing, and I'm still looking forward to anaesthesia, though I do know you're currently having some trouble on the story. But, I agree that it's better to wait for a more fleshed out story than a rushed one, so there's honestly no hurry.

Extra note:
I do have one hopefully constructive critique. I think adding more "domestic" scenes could benefit your stories more. Things like them maybe bickering like an old married couple, or teasing each other, etc. What I notice is often in your stories, you tend to focus on the very lovey-dovey side of them (though you do it quite well, I might add). I'm not sure if I explained this very well, but hopefully it helps in some way.

-Til next time!

What are convulsions? (googles it) Oh! This oughta be good!

SWEET! A new chapter AND a new fic? YES! I love it! Thanks! Really brightened up my day!

Awww, poor Misaki! Three authors who all procrastinate! That's like... being the Aikawa to three Akihiko's!

OMG! Fuyuhiko! ...this doesn't look good.

...REALLY...?!

Well... that was blunt and straight to the point...

Immature? Life experience? Doesn't know how the world works? No offense but I could say the same thing to his son...

Social status?! Is he for real?!

Oh man, this is not doing good to his health.

But I bet Fuyuhiko's just enjoying watching Misaki be so... physically... weak? Unhealthy? The point of passing out?

Strange, metallic tongue on his mouth? ...OMG! BLOOD!

WHAT'S HAPPENING TO HIM?!

A SEIZURE?! SOMEONE CALL AN AMBULANCE!

Gasp! So that's how he got seizures! Poor guy! Stupid classmates! Hope they got expelled!

OMG. I don't believe it... ...at least he had the decency to feel shame and guilt, and apologize.

Yippee! A mention of a Sekaiichi Hatsukoi character! Takano!

What? He's been having seizures when he's alone?

He knows how to handle them?

Well, it's sweet of Akihiko to worry about Misaki so much he's researching to fix it.

He's overreacting, reading horror stories on the internet... ...do those really happen?

Good thing things are going sexual here... not exactly a good time for it.

Awwww! Misaki's saying those three words back!

I hope they fix Misaki's head injury seizure problem... thing.

Yey! Another sweet fluff from the one and only!