Oooooh. Hopefully more will cone soon, lol. Seriously though, take your time. This is really great.

Ahh this story rocks I hope you continue. You’ve put done yourself. I can’t wait to see how it pans out :D.

ahh i have always loved the way u write krillin and 18 thank you so much for writing this story

Well hey, it's pretty fun to read.

waiting for new chapters please post soon

You're writing skills are great and interaction between the characters are so believable awesome sequel

this is really cute! I love it!

I still love this story.

YAY! New chappie! And what a lovely one at that. Also Seventeen..RUDE lmao. Great to see an addition to this story once more!

I think it was a nice change for the tension to be caused not by 17 being mean to Krillin, but being mean to 18. It made things more interesting and less tired and predictable. I'm looking forward to what happens next.

Oh how delighted I was to read this update. The way you write the emotional connection between Krillin and 18 is sublime and I loved the added tension of throwing 17 into the mix. I can’t wait to see how things progress from here.

I must say, I have never been as interested in a Android 18 and Krillin Fan-Fiction in such a long time. By any other, was/is still one my favorite of the countless ones I’ve read, and I’ve read all of them. I’m extremely excited for the next chapter whenever it comes. You’ve done a phenomenal job, keep it going!

Poor Roshi a guest in his own home. Glad Krillin is recognizing it, though I am surprised Roshi hasn't brought it up himself.

I am guessing that Lapris will accidentally happen on the ring during this visit

I'm enjoying this as much as I did "Any Other Day".

It's nice that Krillin feels bad about taking Roshi for granted. Sometimes they do that like it's normal. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.