Good stuff

Noice

This entertains me. I've seen different fanfics lately that have lead and main characters who show no personality, abilities, skills, history, etc...of original creations. What you do doesn't much change characters. Thanks.

This is good, each chapter.

The ladies found the right hero.

All good. Enjoying.

Oh so it's like that with sinister and mystique colaboration. Uh huh.

Interesting. So good for Peter Parker.

Yeah powers in savage land seemed off. Good for Peter Parker not suffering.

Entertaining read, but it’s still rough around the edges in regards to dialogue and the overall presentation and proofreading. I recommend that you rewrite chapter 12 in regards to Mystique in its entirety. Revenge-raping her is COMPLETELY OOC for someone as humble as Spider-Man that it’s downright disturbing. In fact, it sounds like a scene that belongs to Garth Ennis’ “The Boys”.

Nice, but r u gonna make a sequel to this?

This was an interesting read, but you are aware that what they did to Mystique was literally rape, right? And that is so very illegal and immoral. Peter Parker would never force himself on someone, let alone for revenge. Just pointing out, as another reviewer wrote, it was actually disturbing, although I am interested in the idea of Peter x Mystique. It might just be that I like Mystique.

what they did to Mystique is actually really disturbing

Spider-Man can handle the Sinister Six in his own but the combine strength of Hawkeye, She Hulk, M and Tigra weren't enough?

Mdhunter here. Great job with this fanfic. So there’s going to be a sequel starring the female members of the Avengers? Oh, will the Invisible Woman also starr in it? I know she isn’t technically an Avenger but still! And Spidey will pick up his role from last time, yes? Anyways, please continue with a sequel soon, and have a great weekend. :)