another trash oc, another trash oc fic

Can you do a chapter where Allura and Mae finally talk about their relationship and Allura is nice to Mae

Can you do a chapter where Mae finds her mom

Yasss, loved this chapter. To be honest this book has been sitting in my library for a whole month till I watched the six season and some Fairy Tail. I'm gonna have to go back and read the book over again XD not that K mind of course. This is a really good crossover book, and I just can't wait to read more and more chapters that you publish.

Hahaha that last part was so rich! Keep it up!

*shakes the prison bars harder* More! I need more!

I love this book. This is the best crossover book on Fairy Tail that's I've ever read. I can't wait for a new update. But, I do have a question. Later in, will Mae and Allura ever settle there differences and a get along?

Shipping names? I dunno...SpaceParent shipping? CommandMode shipping? Prosthetic shipping? I seriously am not good at any of those things though my friends made one for me once. Anyways great chapter. Loved the sweet Mae x Shiro moments. Just do me a favor and slowly ease into the romance. I HATE it when people just jump into it unless it is a one-shot.

Yeah you go Mae! Anyways not too bad but I recommend going back and really polishing this story up before submitting it in if you haven't already. Keep in mind what the conflict is while doing so. Also I recommend adding in a bit of subtle detail. I don't have to do this But I just thought I'd say something as one writer to another.

You seriously like torturing me with these clifffangers don't you? Anyways 'nother great chapter. I have to say that the stilts idea was pretty ingenious. And the moment between Shiro and Mae was cute.

*Sniffles* You were right. The music was perfect. *sniffles* wahhhhhh! :')
Anyways great chapter and I'm glad my comments are appreciated. I think the moment between Shiro and Mae was so sweet.
And as for the creative writing thing, I totally get you. I have that class too and while it is easy, I can probably also say that, like you, I take it a little too seriously. Hahhaha.
Anywho, keep up the good work and I hope you have an excellent day. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Whooohooo! Bloody epic! I may just have to come to you for help on my Fairy Tail crossover once I'm done with my transformers story. And may you be lucky enough to impress your creative writing teacher cuz I certainly think you have a decent chance.

Can I just say...THAT WAS BLOODY EPIC! That was way better than what I imagined happening. Kinda ticked about the cliffhanger but that's nothing new with me. And now I can't wait to read about Allura's and Keith's and the rest of the paladin's reactions to Mae's magic fight. Hopefully Allura won't pull a B-otch move and act like Mae is a monster. But that will probably keep things interesting.
And in regards to your goal, well I wish you all the luck in the world and hopefully your creative writing teacher likes it. Just please don't forget to look back at some things and take your time writing.
Altogether, another great chapter has been revealed and I absolutely cannot wait for more. please have a good day and UPDATE SOON!

Holy mother! Nice job on the name Akhlys. I totally got the reference. Greek goddess of misery, right? And Do I feel a fight scene coming on? Please tell me Mae and miss acid breath are gonna go head to head and have a scene like how Natsu faced Gildarts on Tenrou island and Gildarts released all his magic power at once and practically crushed Natsu with his overwhelming magical power. I’m just saying cuz that would be totally awesome ya know? And no one can really get close to them and only watch in awe/abject terror as the two try to beat each other to hell and back.
Also, correct me if I’m wrong but it sounds like Allura is absolutely in the dark about Mae’s Dragon Slayer capabilities?
Still nice job on ‘getting inside the characters head’ as my writing teacher would say. You at least build a believable character with both strengths and flaws. The same can’t be said for all other authors.

Whoa! Plot twist! Still, short but still has some detail. Very well done. Just do me a solid though and tell me that there will be an epic dragon slayer showdown. Please. In any case, keep up the brilliant work and update as soon as you are able too. I really hate seeing brilliant works abandoned like yesterday’s trash.