... wow no pulling punches for your audience that is reading this huh? I gotta ask, but have You made the decision for Astramille comment like this for the entire 48 chapters? Like, I’ll be blunt, but I’m part of these “
guys that are “delusional” and I don’t often say these kinds of comments but I am Christian and reading on this kind of dialogue our protagonist seems on bent of repeating seems a bit of a Self insert, and I’m going to assume that your an atheist as well?

I mean don’t get me wrong, what I’ve read so far is really interesting, and your premise is great so far, but I can’t really relate to this protagonist, he seems to calm in his situation. And being preachy on this kind of subject is making me like this guy even less. I really would like to know if he’s written like this on purpose. If not then I’ll respect to what your writing but I’ll just not read it, from the follows and favorites other people like this story and it might not be for me to read. I mean I ain’t important, and take my opinions with a grain of salt.

On another note, I’m seeing something off about of Astramille. Like it’s been established that he isn’t a fan of anime, so I was expecting him to mentally critique on some anime tropes or cliches on why he’s not a fan of anime. Like how people were dressed, and their colorful hair.

Also will the protagonist will have some harrowing challenges ahead? will there be lesson and experiences that he will learn in this kinda fucked up world? Will he change for the better or is this one of these stories where the protagonist kinda trumps away any problems that he faces.

Have a blessed day, and prioritize on your life. Since your writing this for free for reader to read.

Edit: well at least he has some tact to pompous noble pricks like that king.

Jesus this protagonist is such a Debbie downer, I hope his personality is done on purpose because the way he expresses his opinions doesn’t come with any tact. Like seriously, he can’t just say those things in a fantasy world were people lived differently then now. I mean shouldn’t he be more cautious with the way he speaks? He’s like Sheldon from Big Bang theory.

Hope he has a change of heart in the upcoming chapters, and pacing feels a bit off. I think it’s going a bit too quick.

Guns may not be enough to beat monster girls tbh. Kenkou cross made them OP as hell, and lilims and and other strong mgs are country level magic users I don’t think guns can beat that. Especially since I believe a barrier spell may be able to block bullets easily.

Let him get a Mosin and do a demonstration for these primitives.

I wish astramille could reform this world with logic and peace... sadly reality is not so kind...

Will Astramille befriend with Elt?

Is Astramille ever going to get out of Lecastre?

oh guess that’s why the titania was off character. somehow not being influenced by the current demon lord’s demonic energy along with gathering several artifacts that could easily manufacture powerful weaponry (I apologize if this was stated earlier but I overlooked by mistake)

though im starting to question if Aine somehow is constructing a explosive equivalent to a nuclear bomb since she is so hellbent on starting production of such armaments mentioned before.

but all things considered the order and possibly a few other “factions” are going to turn this world into a hell hole if it gets to that point. I doubt any treaties would be signed with the demon lord even if they are on the verge of collapse considered the ideals and morals with the order,

speaking of treaties will there some sort of Geneva convention like events in the future? Since our protagonist himself stated that torture was no longer being used on earth I automatically assumed that he may push for these sort of things.

But killing machines,technology, And diplomatic approaches aside These chapters are great. I hope to see more of them soon!

(sorry for the grammatical mistakes. I’m not a good performer in ELA classes so most if not all my sentences are missing crucial punctuation or capitalization. )

A lot of things can be substituted by magic and alchemy like the guns they produced. The true technology they need to have is modern thinking and rationalism. He should give out Enlightment era treatises and papers to the people to start an Enlightment in that world. Their world has a lot of potential to surpass Astramille's world, should they be able to.

Awesome chapter.

Just give the king a nuke for shits and giggles. What could possibly go wrong?

In all seriousness though, i bet they could actually create Gatlings, as they aren’t as intricate as modern machine guns. Though they’d need to find out how to invent and mass produce percussion caps and primer

Will there be some sort of diplomatic approach to monster eventually? or will this just turn into the typical mass slaughter? hopefully its the former (but then again the radical extremists are simply going to be a pain to deal with so that option may not be feasible)

another thing, will Astramille eventually learn about the 7 islands perhaps? or will that be left out? since the islands are near identical to that of the modern age I was wondering if he will eventually take some interest on what they were capable of. then again he was suddenly ambushed early on the story

one more thing, about the titania trying to build the equipment and vehicles from the erm..documents? that our protagonist lost. will she eventually realize that she was assembling something meant to kill? or does she already somewhat acknowledge this and is trying to create prototypes not actually designed to deal devastating damage? (Sorry if this sounds confusing I couldnt think of anything else to convey my thoughts)

just hope the goddesses dont get involved from what might happen when the humans of this world finally has modern day equipment

this...review ended up being far longer and confusing than i wanted, so Im sorry if you couldnt really understand what I was attempting to say

This was filler? I must have the acquired taste for it then.

Awesome chapter.