whenever i feel off, whenever i feel wrong, reading this... it helps me. something about it helps. thank you.

Great insight.

This is the type of Ben 10 story I NEED! Major thanks for this dose of realism that the show and writers completely ignored.

I just read this and I love how it went. I really felt so bad for Ben how he has to remember that the universe created is not the original, at least until Azmuth comes in the end. You written this so well I wish you would continue this to see how it goes. It’s still an amazing FanFiction I’m just happy I fount it.

I read this when you first posted this and have been looking for it ever since, thank you.

Please continue this. Because with no disrespect to other fanfiction writers, this is one of the best fanfictions I've read in my 6 years of reading them. I can honestly see this clearly in my minds eye, and I really want to see how you would continue this. Thank you for posting this, and please continue this wonderful work. (I just realized how much I wrote. Sorry.)

I sincerely hope this one shot becomes more cause you've got a new follower.

Fuck. This was awesome in all the ways something could be. Heartbreaking and terrifying. What indeed?

My heart, it hurts.