| Reviews for In An Alternate Universe: The Lost Prince |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 8h love this story. it is amazing |
 IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 12 . 7/5 Great chapter! One thing that is getting a little annoying is you constantly harping on how attractive Percy is, but other than that, this is great! Keep up the amazing work |
| Agile PvP chapter 12 . 7/5 hey! nice chapter! possible harem with Zoe, Reyna, and whoever else you had planned, maybe? this was a great chapter, even if a little short. have to go for quality over quantity sometimes right? wish you luck in future chapters! |
| Jojo Jesus chapter 12 . 7/5 Loved it dude. Take whatever time you need. We can wait. |
| Alfa123 chapter 12 . 7/5 Really good chapter |
| KingLouisOfGreece chapter 12 . 7/4 This is an amazing story. I hope that there will be an update soon |
| fedora142 chapter 12 . 7/3 DAMNNNN CANT GET ENUFF OF THIS UPDATE PLEASEEE |
| r10roce chapter 12 . 7/3 Me encanta esta historia, espero con ganas el siguiente capitulo y la verdad quiero que aparezcan las hermanas de percy. |
| Arraia chapter 12 . 7/3 Perfect and update soon please Percy x chaos |
| Ladis11 chapter 12 . 7/3 Oh man I love this story. I'm like Thanathos upon seeing Percy, I see the notification and I can't resist it. This story is perfect on so many levels, I can't wait for the next chapter. So keep up the good work :D |
| Lenny1111 chapter 12 . 7/3 Love the chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28 Plz update ASAP this is a great story |
| IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 11 . 6/16 Finally, it’s time for Chaos and Order. I’m glad I continued reading, I almost stopped because the story seemed to just be dragging along while they were Tartarus. That was admittedly pretty tedious to read. However, I’ve noticed several errors in your story line, probably due to the break you took. In the beginning, you had Origin completely unaware of Existence and he didn’t learn of him until he and End talked in the Void. Later on, though, you said that Existence was beaten back by Origin and End, and that he was making his return with a new domain. The issue is that they never encountered Existence and didn’t know they had a father/creator in the first chapter (up until End’s reveal). There were a few other plot holes/issues I noticed, but this was the one that really stuck out to me. Anyway, great story. Keep up the amazing work! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/15 Really enjoying this. I love how you setup fun relationships between Percy and the gods. |
| IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 8 . 6/15 It’s a cool concept but this is advancing wayyyyy too slowly |
