Reviews for Sangokuden Armored War Gods Saga 06: End of the Armored War Gods (II)
Guest chapter 38 . 9/24/2019
"look we are supposed to be better then this it not supposed to be this toxic but you trashing on a man visions his ideas your trashing on other people ideas and it shouldn't be like this, you fellow people to the fandom and you just crap on their visions."

If its a stupid self insert fic where he can't even make up his own powers for his guys, he just steals them from a real kr show, maybe his story isnt that good and he can start with not doing that in his next story
dDd of Trinity chapter 38 . 9/21/2019
Here’s a funny conversation that happened on spacebattles which speaks the truth about your Armored War God series:

So-So: Mmm, maybe arrange things to make it work as such?
Like, this does involve parallel worlds, so...

Quantum01: Making Summer Build with all the backstory is a little too convoluted...
It's easier to just make her GHost

HackerEX: That's true, unless you want to clog the RWBY mythos with Build's lore...

Jet4281: And then to mix all of that with Ghost’s lore...

HackerEX: And you get a story cocktail too thick to even taste...and it tastes like garbage

Jet4281: That’s what happened to Armored War Gods alright: Chrome throwing in too much stuff he liked enough to the point that it congested the whole damn thing.

Me: Wow. This author really sounds like a total tool of a human being! LOL
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2019
Do you still make this fanfic or you stop,you know i like this fics and i don't want you to stop,i want to know more what happen to nagata so please keep continue don't hear what they say especially thoes trashing your idea,i'm supporting your fic and here my advice keep doing it and never stop belived what you have made it,go for it let it be
Tailsmo4ever chapter 38 . 4/26/2019
Ok, so I am not really up to date with this story, but this does look interesting with how you're going with all this. Stakes seem to be up and enemies are approaching endgames. And Nagata seems to have returned from limbo. Whatever you plan on taking this, best of luck.
Guest chapter 38 . 4/17/2019
Look at the reviews sighs and this is one the reasons why this story can't get done, you idiots just don't get it do you?.keep talking about how you want to help him and yet you keep talking behind his back, ganging up on him but your not saying anything on how he should be better and that bull crap and know what why should he listen to you idiots from another site why? because you somehow know better? your called him a lost cause right? because y'all want him to be you and not him to be him and that dumb. look we are supposed to be better then this it not supposed to be this toxic but you trashing on a man visions his ideas your trashing on other people ideas and it shouldn't be like this, you fellow people to the fandom and you just crap on their visions. but what know what is that the way it is then that fine because at the end of the day you gonna be you and them be gonna them that all that matter.

PS KR chrome and to those that read this review never change who you are i mean a little change won't hurt (lol) but you be you.
Guest chapter 38 . 4/17/2019
Look at the reviews sighs and this is one the reasons why this story can't get done, you idiots just don't get it do you?.
8GoKey40th chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
s/13259760/1/Kamen-Rider-Reich

Read and review my story Sailor Rider you motherfucking piece of shit!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
Fuck you Sailor Rider! Review mt story on my secobd account:
Sailor Rider chapter 1 . 4/12/2019
Nobody cares about the opinion of a Chinese Colony 8GoKey40th. You are from that shithole Philippines right? Is your country now an official colony of China? Are you all communists there?
Antiriple Accel chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
Hello Chrome. I have an idea for a new Kamen Rider crossover. Can you help me write it? It is called Kamen Rider Reich. Hitler is the main character and he got powers from experiments. He would have different forms like Gas Form and Longinus Form. Final form would be named Neo Form. It would crossover with Awakening and Hitler will have a harem composed of all female party members because he is hot. Instead of "Henshin" it will be "Heilshin". PM me.
8GoKey40th chapter 38 . 4/10/2019
Also, either way, I won’t even give any advice to you on how to improve your stories, since at this point, you don’t want to change. One way or another, I won’t bother this, and I’ll completely ignore you.
8GoKey40th chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
To the guest reviewers who literally copy-pasted a conversation from Spacebattles, I’m disappointed. You know, why waste your time on a bad story like this, when clearly you can do a better story than this?

I don’t know how bad this story is, and I’m quite thankful and lucky that I don’t know this. Kamen Rider Chrome, I’ve seen your conversations and frankly, I can tell you’re not even trying with your stories. The moment I saw there was a rape in one chapter, I was disturbed to the core.

And now I can totally see why self-inserts are looked down. At this point, even I’m wasting my time reviewing this garbage of a story, since I can tell you write what you can, even if it’s bad. Armored War Gods is one of the worst fanfictions I’ve heard, and I’m lucky I didn’t know
Ohma Revive chapter 38 . 4/10/2019
Dai Shi watched from his orb rather shocked. He knew something would occur, it takes a lot more than a single death to truly kill a phoenix. But this on the orb? Where Sou-Sou becomes a white Gaim from a lockseed no one knew existed. Using a ton of various weapons from various arms, Dai Shi took several mental notes as she obliterated the Armored War Devil.

One, this Kiwami Lockseed must be amplifying the powers of her weapons. He had seen the power of the Sonic Arrow multiple times, even with Sigurd's new power. But the arrows fired from Sou-Sou's newly made Sonic Arrow were strong enough to break past not only the arrow, but damage him. She twisted that lockseed again to spawn the Banaspear as she stabs Sigurd with it repeated, creating sparks. That's what caught his eyes, the weapon's power. If he remembers correctly, that's among the weaker of the lockseeds, and for some reason, the spear that normally belongs to Baron was now strong enough to harm Sigurd.

Two, she relies on speed. Watching her fight, Dai Shi notice her strikes, while strong, were not as strong for a godly-looking figure. The fact she constantly moves and swaps weapons suggests either having relatively weak strength or that she is trying to keep on the move. Mix up the weapons to keep the opponent on their knees. He noted it as Baron entered the field with his new and improved arms and drivers. Watching his love, if it weren't anymore obvious to Dai Shi, crush the man like a fruit being hit by a hammer.

Three, she pushed away Baron as she readied a finisher with the Sonic Arrow, putting the Lemon Energy Lockseed on the slot. Watching as Sigurd tried to get up, she blasted him as he exploded in a specatular explosion. Dai Shi frowned, the fact she gained a power like this is bothersome. Something that is powered not by Chi and immune to any power draining would prove a problem, but Dai Shi made a note of it, if he can get 2 Gods killed (even if one was by proxy), he was fine enough that he could win. Until he looked down and saw a very baffling sight of Karin taking on Baron and winning. The being sat down on the throne, watching the rather baffling sight of Baron facing off against her love as she jumped back, making the Dai Dai DJ Ju and aiming at him. This was very interesting, as far as he was concerned, they were the God's lapdogs at best and mindless beings at worst. What could have caused such a change in her, Dai Chi thought about it as he watched the orb.

- O -

Baron tried to block the blast as Gaim fired a rapid-fire blast from the Matchlock-like gun, feeling himself be pushed back as he tried to move forward, feeling part of the Ignition Booster get chipped by the blasts as he looked up.

"I know everything Mitsuki. About your past, how you came here. I gotta say, I'm disappointed." She said as Baron flew up, Gaim eyeing him as she twisted the Lockseed to spawn the saber and connect the two weapons together.

"You lost your parents, you respected me. I understand if any of your behavior up to now was because of it. I do not hold a grudge for losing your parents, I do however hold a grudge for lying about who you really are." She spoke, even from afar, Mitsuki can hear it as Gaim walked outside.

"I followed you because of the suit. I'd never seen anything like it and believe you were a righteous god. I was wrong, I became blinded. Mitsuki, in truth, even now, I know that there is good in you. If I had noticed earlier, maybe I could have curbed this twisted belief of heroism you have." She said as she aimed the sword at him.

"W-Wait, what are you talking about, Karin. We've been in this since the beginning, why do you want to kill me?!" He shouted as Karin let lose her tears.

"Because now with the fact you're some ordinary bastard from another world. It makes me look like a fool. I was blinded, the peasants were blinded. You got me easily, I became your lapdog. Even if I know we have a true love for each other. All of that positive qualities you crushed to stay stagnant where you were, with everything and the belief that everything will convinently come to you! I was lied to since the very beginning!" Karin said as she then took the blade and slashed Baron, who barely moved the way as the blade cut partially into the armor.

"You think everything, me, this suffering is all your glory. That I am your trophy. Mitsuki Akechi, I am no Trophy...I will not stand by any longer..." She said as her tears dried. Mitsuki's face paled, he knew history well enough that a common depiction of Cao Cao was that he was a cruel man. In the next moments, he thought of everything up to now. The situations he got into, his friends, did everything he did lead to Cao Cao becoming the monster depicted in history? No, Mitsuki will not allow that. Even if what she says is true, there's one thing he will not let her become, a Tyrant. A tyrant is the last thing anyone wants because of the RinJyuKen. He knew what he had to say in mind, floating near her again.

"Karin! Even if you're right, killing me isn't the right answer. How many deeds did I do that saved people? How many people became happy because of me? Even for myself, I still did something that benefited the country!" He shouted, Karin remembers all the things he did in the past. From helping villages to helping battles, earning fame and glory. But even among those happy moments, she questioned if Mitsuki was enjoying the company...or enjoying everything like they served her.

"Only for you to take it all into your ego, to make everything around you your bitch and servant!" Karin shouted.

"And the last thing China needs right now is a Tyrant. Kill me and you'll spark a revolution against yourself. Say what you will, I have more than a couple sins I'm not aware of. But killing me isn't the right answer." He said as Gaim sighed, Mitsuki eyed her, not just out of anger. No, her knowing his past would make her anger, he's not dumb. He's scared that the Kiwami Lockseed did something to her. The Lockseed, he doesn't recognize it from the show. Or at least how far he got in the show, but still, this looked bad for him. He waited for Karin's answer.

"I'll take it." She said as Baron's eyes widened.

"I'll take the wrath of my people. I have made my decision, Mitsuki. I will kill you, and I will do the same to ALL the Armored War Gods and RinJyuKen, I will unite China under my name." She said as Baron looked in shock, floating back as Karin took this chance to put the Lemon Energy Lockseed in quickly and lock it in.

- LOCK ON! -

As the blade counted up to the normal 1,000,000, adding a statement about it being unlimited. Baron tried to rush in, only to recieve a kick to the face as he flew back slightly.

"I'll take on everyone, not for my sake...but..." She said as the blade began to charge with a yellow energy, eyes widened with determination as she pressed the trigger, swinging her blade as it quickly became a giant blade.

- LEMON ENERGY! -

He didn't feel his lower half as it was cut straight off, he couldn't scream as he was shocked by what had just happened.

"I'll do it for China's sake." She said as she walked down to the courtroom, what few guards remained staring at the sight. Gaim grabbed Baron's lockseed and opened it, yanking it out of the Driver and looking at it.

"And most of all...you lied to the phoenix. Mitsuki, this lockseed doesn't belong to you." She said, throwing it away from him and taking the sword, breaking it in half as the phoenix rose from it, screaming in pain as the flames faded, become dust instead of ash as it cried for help before fading away. The Guards all aimed their weapons at her as she motioned her arm.

"Stand down...all of you!" She shouted as the Guards took several steps back out of fear. Hearing their leader's voice that demanding as she looked at the now dying man.

"Karin, listen. You're going to make a greater mistake than you can ever accuse me of. China can't handle a tyrant...You know they can't, please, I need to live." Mitsuki asked, not begged as Karin looked at him. From his eyes, she expected fake sympathy or sadness. But he seemed to show real sorrow in his eyes.

"I know what it means to be alone. I lost everyone I cared for because of fate. But this is worse than that, this isn't about me or you. It's China, Karin. If I die and the country hears you did it, do you really expect to take on everyone?" He asked as Karin pointed the sword, thinking over his questions. It was true that the RinJyuKen were running rampant, Mitsuki is right when he says that they are heroes. It may have been shit concidence he even came here. But still, Karin looked at her. As if on command, her helmet vanished and showed her face, crying.

"Mitsuki, I know you mean well with those words. But..." She stopped as she put the blade through Mitsuki's head, blood getting it as everyone screamed in horror. Keeping her eyes on Mitsuki's eyes locked in terror.

"Whoever said I was going to stick around for a mob to come..." She said as she walked away from the corpse, every guard stayed silent as she walked up the stairs. No one made a move, each one had a face of anger and fear, but beneath it was a lingering question...

"Why, my Queen?"

Karin walked back up to the palace, still morphed as the girls looked in horror. She sighs as she looked at them, eyes firece with determination.

"Girls, I'm sorry about that. But I learned that our Gods are not who we praised them to be, for that, I am..." She sighs, Mitsuki's words echoed in his head. She can't deny that Mitsuki was a completely awful person. Whiny and vain? Yes, but anyone who loses their family like that turns out that way. But once he got here? It changed for the worst. Still, he was right she needed to prepare for tons of yelling.

"They are fakes, summoned from another world with Toys from something they watch made real. But these..." She said as pointed to the Driver.

"They are real, I saw them compared to the ones the Gods have, they're fake. Everything about them is fake, we've been handling the situation wrong so...Tomorrow..." She said as she looked at everyone.

"I'm leaving the throne, I will unite China by purging the country of these Gods and RinJyuKen." She spoke as she walked up to her room, everyone else was silent as she took off the driver, returning to her normal clothes as she went to her bedroom.

"Mitsuki, I have to do this. I will wake up China and set the country free with my arms." She said as she got in bed. Ready to make the uncomfortable announcement tomorrow, a bit of tears falling from her eyes. Knowing how many bonds she's about to break by doing all of this.

- O -

Dai Shi didn't move. He couldn't, she knew about how the Gods got here? No, he can exploit it, his mind rushed to make a strategy as he tried to think of anything, something about this development. Something about this felt wrong, like someone was pulling the strings behind the stage...or some being thought it was funny to give one of the God's lapdogs the power to defeat them. No, he wasn't out of options, Sou-Sou...no, Karin gave him the perfect plan for the next few weeks. This death can be used to his advantage.

As he got up from his throne, he motioned his hand, Black Baron appearing before him. A Fiend Lockseed in his holder.

"Black Baron, I need you for something." Dai Shi said as Black Baron looked up.

"Let's just say that the Phoenix has been...permanent killed by its own lord. I want you to run...a smear campaign against her. Let's raise the flames more." Dai Shi said as Black Baron didn't move, but shook his arm.

"Sir, with all due respect, are you implying that Baron's own love killed him?" He asked, rather baffled at his lord's request. Dai Shi didn't bother even attempting anything to punish him for questioning him, he deserved to know and he need Black Baron's full cooperation.

"Yes, Sou-Sou has gained a lockseed far stronger than the 4 legendary Lockseeds and has destroyed the phoenix lockseed. Now, she has killed Mitsuki. I plan to make sure a truly massive riot comes to her palace in the coming week." Dai Shi said.

"And what about the anger generated? We take it and power-up our minions?" Black Baron asked as Dai Shi nodded.

"Exactly. I want you to, fuel the flames as they say. Make it look like Mitsuki's angry spirit haunting her, you know how blindly faithful the peasants can be to them." Dai Shi said as Black Baron nodded.

"It will be done, Lord Dai Shi." Black Baron said as he walked out of the throne room. A part of him nagged to face the girl for killing one of the Armored War Gods, but another told him to just follow orders. Black Baron was keen to following orders and making Sou-Sou's life a living hell.
Daishi chapter 38 . 4/10/2019
“Yeah, I'm just going to leave this thread. CYA.”

And this is why you’re a close minded dumbass (which explains where you live lol) if you’re just gonna respond like that to people who state facts on a dumbass author who doesn’t give enough effort on his story if he doesn’t get help from someone that isn’t trying to brown nose you! I’m not sorry since your group of that fanfiction forum is just not helpful enough and they’re just not gonna vocally agree with the people on spacebattles since they mentally see you’re a lost cause as well!
Nintama Rataru chapter 38 . 4/9/2019
If you really want to finish your story, then just post the upcoming story chapters (that you completed so far) all at once (without any proofreading) instead of making people wait with these unreasonable wait time.

And don’t be that selfish dumbass who wants a 90% - 10% compromise when people try to give you advice on spacebattles! Don’t be that stubborn like those white people who are racist in the America!
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