Do more please

Shut up NothingBetterToDo11, you Lily hater.

The Lincolns should use their powers to torture and kill all the Lilys in the multiverse. That would be very entertaining to see.

That was a very interesting chapter. It would be nice if you could find some time later to finish this story, so when you have time to write, please think about finishing this story. That would be nice. Good luck for your school. See you

First, I'm a bit sad now that we won't have news about fics from you anymore from now on but I understand that education is more important and it's your life so what I can only do is to wish you luck for your studies. Second, I don't think your first fanfic was that bad. I mean, you had a wild imagination back then and you still have it, the most "fanfictionised" TLH episode back then was Brawn In The Family, "Two minds, One body" had an interesant plot and a good storyline and writing style. The only bad thing you did with this fic was to let it aside. So, um, yeah ... good luck with your studies and who knows, may be at your free time in that college where you are going to, you could become a known amateur novel writer :)

Make one more chapter, bring closure

I REALLY WANTED TO SEE THE END OF THIS STORY

Wow...I wonder if Ink Lincoln have seen this LH AU before? (Ink Linc is MasterCaster's oc by the way. You should read his story's there really cool!)

wait a monment... that mean would you not make more chapters of this or any story?,

i mean this is the end of you in fanfiction for ever?

No need to worry and no need to apologise, anyway my best wishes to your future endeavors at college .. good luck on the road your about to go on.

That is an awesome chapter.

Yeah, Luna's not going to survive any of this, and even if she does...life for her is practically over.

Your college must be super secretive, and FBI-like. It would explain all the secrecy.

To be honest, I didn't think the Louds ever stood a chance...fate seemed to want to exact its justice, or in this case Lyra.

In case it will be forever before you return, I loved those twists and turns this story had. We all kinda knew that Lincoln will never be the same, but to sever ties forever? And Lyra's 'Wrath'? Damn, that's heavy-level stuff. No amount of apologies or making it up to him will ever make this family whole again...even more so, considering.

I will miss this story, big time. I envision a bittersweet ending for all involved. Luna could die from this, and Lana will probably suffer a fate worse than death. But Lincoln finally understand that he took things too far and turns himself in eventually, and ultimately realizing he threw away what he had, and he paid a price far greater than what would have happened had he stayed.

good bye :(

Holy shit ! I really love this story ! And or seems that Lyra is unstoppable, like, there won't be any happy ending . You really are a great writer Bh. I also wanted to point out that your Albert was a bit acting out of character in the vehicle when Lisa handed him the gun. It's nothing bad but he seemed odd at this moment considering that he is an ancient Navy :p

OOOOOOOOOOOH YEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAH

That! is i want see!

Ho ho you achieve me in the last chapter, i have a lot afraid from the result.

but all is getting for the good way