Bro. I really like where this is going. I really like to see Jaune have a "phase of re-discovery' or something. Something like, a person or thing or experience that will give him the willpower to give it all to making himself better.

For him to strive above the clouds of illusion, of his ultimate desires and futile pleas, would be the greatest sacrifice of a martyr and the blessing of a hero.

Wonder why Jaune didn't outright tell them he wanted to be expelled? Perhaps it's against the contract to purposefully request to be expelled? Idk, just curious about in-universe explanation.

I'll read ur stuff m8 all I got is time

I really dig this concept and I'm looking forward to see what potention Ozpin saw in Jaune. The only thing I dislike is the way the female characters are described. Their introductions always mention their physical appearance and beauty, and that's for literally every female character.

Not to mention the way Jaune describes them in his head in a strange almost objectifying way like their beauty is a core part of their character- which shouldn't be since someone's physical appearance isn't their whole personality. And I find it weird how the girls Jaune meets are presented as possible love interests which makes it seem like he sees them as potential girl friends and not regular people.

I love the story so far and I think it's great, but the way you present the female characters is really strange.

Still think this should br a harem
Yes I read this for like the gajillionth time today lmaoo
Ruby being an Uncle-con just like Yang being a Daddy-con lmaooo
Go get em reluctant Jaune Hahah

I like your story. Hope you find a beta reader you like.

Nice story so far and I've really gotta say that Ozma is a massive dick here. All the lies and his pathetic attempts to force Jaune into becoming a huntsman. It's a very interesting story though, with different teams and incorporating the rest of Jaune's family.
It's a downright shame that you only update about twice a year, but better that then cranking out half-baked mediocre chapters.

Loving the progression. Ozpin being absorbed in thought was an interesting take for the chapter. Willing to beta, too.

This is good, please keep up the good work.

I didn’t notice any mistakes. Also, that Ozpin and Ozma scene was really sad and deep. It made me feel bad for the original Ozpin.

god my hate for ozpin has become bigger

So much angst that's going nowhere. Jaune is honestly acting more like a tsundere than somebody that legit doesn't want to be there.

Ozpin even in the show was a parasite hell the only reason he got into a fight with his spouse was because of them finding out there kids had magic literally her whole wipe out control humanity as gods plan he was ok and her whole use the relics to restart plan he also seemed to have no complaints for canonically . I’m guessing ozma here is just lookin At jsune as a future meat suit. The irony that he is as much of a monster if not more so than Salem is funny . Hope jaune gives all of ozmas plans the finger.

Nice chapter, keep it up and stay safe Author

Damnit, seeing people update their fics makes me want to update mine, and I updated it this week