Oh god, its another know it all daphne fanfic... ️

You’ve just described Harry as this big macho man but then you give him a rapier?

Ok first your character development needs improvement as from what I am seeing neither the MC and supporting cast has any noticeable development.
Another is that having an OP MC is Ok but portraying him to be ambitious to a point that he is manipulating a lot of important event such as the prophecy is lame.
Narration needs improvement as it feels like your just stuffing plot after plot after plot just for your story to work

OMNIPOTENTLY OH HELL NO. Lily must lay down her life in order for Voldemort's killing curse to rebound upon him.

Please update if you have time! I love it, I can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm loving the story so far, but I believe that I may have found a slight mistake. In one of the previous chapters you had harry state that he was a pureblood, in this you have him state instead that he's a half-blood to explain why the malfoys would hate him living in their home. If it isn't a mistake just ignore my comment about it. But nonetheless the story so far is very enjoyable.

love this story so far please update soon

Not a bad crossover, well written and funny at times. I look forward to see it completed.

I really enjoy this story, especially with the interesting nature vs. nurture premise of a Harry Potter who has subsumed a tiny bit of Voldemort’s soul, then has a totally different upbringing! It’s interesting to see how TMR’s magpie-like tendencies seem to have combined with the children of Aphrodite’s characteristics, as well as his sociopathy combined with Harry’s huge capacity for love. Please update soon, and I would love to see the Harry/Hermes story you mentioned in the notes!

Good one could you please continue

I like an OP Harry as much as the next guy, trust me. This, however is gonna end up in a mess. I’ll summarize my reasons as to why I think that’s going to be the case.
Harry VS Daphne looks to be an unstoppable force VS an immovable object. Plus, the character building in general has been left neglected, or has been mostly done off-story. Even one or two chapters would have been enough. It’s a clever writing tool, but leaves a reader disappointed.
Harry has too many fingers in too many pies, and like the plot looks to be over ambitious. Which is a sure recipe for disaster, both for the story and for the MC. Plus, the narrative feels like it’s barreling through without pause, trying to fit a lot in too little.
Considering it’s a unique premise, I want to proven wrong, believe me. But running out of steam is very easy and all too common.
Cheers!

It’s a good story, but I would have some proof read it and rewrite some parts of it. You have Harry being introduced to his brother and friends one chapter then being reintroduced the next chapter as if they’ve never met.

Love the story. One of the more mature and well-written hp/pjo stories. Please do update! Keep up the good work.

Yes 14 yr old demigod able to deduce like Sherlock Holmes. Naruto's ability to a demigod Daphne for 1. 2 why make her demigod which seems pointless unless u plan for the norse to be introduced in your fic as well.

Dude you need to update your stories soon! There are many rabid fans out here and some day they are gonna gather together to storm your house and demand updates!