Very good! I loved the plot, how it moved along and enjoyed the story altogether. Thank you!

I'm loving your work. You have such a way with these two. The voices you give them. Wonderful.

Just awesome! Thank you!

This story was beautifully written and I love it almost as I love forged in flames. For me you are a magical writer.

Like this story but have to say come on Snape how about some reciprocity, he is being sexually selfish and Hermione needs to ask for some satisfaction. Twice she has gotten him off with nothing for her, bad lover!

Amazing

Loved it

Well I am glad you wrote this last chapter to bring everything together. I think having everyone together at the end going on the offensive is a great idea. And I loved Severus and Hermione in the library, working so well together that it freaks the boys out.

You do a particularly good job with intense emotions, and describing nonverbal communication. Thanks for writing this story, I had a lot of fun reading it.

I like how McGonagall isn't so easily convinced. I had trouble with her seeming to just know what is actually going on with Snape, it seems like she would need more info to figure that out. Also how would she know what Hermione did at the manor - wouldn't she assume Snape did it? But I can totally see her helping to keep that info from the boys for Hermione's sake.

This is a nice way to give them a moment before going back into the world. Her watching him like she is seeing him for the first time was rather sweet. And the end of this chapter was just heartbreaking.

The intense pacing of this chapter is friggin amazing. I also really like your use of lavendar and copper to describe their magic. That kind of language can be eye-rollingly overdone but you strike the right balance.

You stuck well to her character by having her be aware of the horror of what she did, and of course worrying about the house elves. Also, I was quite aware that Severus was shirtless for this entire scene and I am totally okay with it.

I am so glad I'm not reading this when I would have to wait for an update.

Ah, that explains how he could not know a out the left handed charm. I don't know how you managed to pull off a super angsty intense relationship at the same time as just the right amount of student teacher in there, but you did and I am totally good with it.

Even if there were no charm, I think he would struggle to believe a woman like her could care about him. He has some pretty severe attachment issues.

I really like their planning here. It shows off their individual cleverness in a way that both can shine. At the same time, they both miss things and make mistakes, so they still seem human. And when they catch each other's errors it shows them working well as a team.

He complements her, and she thinks that means they won't survive. Yes, seems about right.

I think it is really good that she has some experience here, otherwise it would be hard to believe she would go so far - or that she would have a clue what she is doing. It's not that complicated of an apparatus but even a pencil sharpener comes with a manual.

That was a terrible analogy and I should change it but I made myself laugh so it's staying.