You know, I've never seen a ZedxJinx Fanfic but now that I'm thinking about it...

Anyhow, good chapter! I only recently started reading this, but I do like it a lot. Mainly just because a well written Jinx is very fun to read. Keep up the good work!

whoa, thats cute 3 tks for the mention!

im missing vi on this story tho, but i have to say that im really curious for the final! :DD
cant wait to see it!

I can already imagine the next chapter to be like one of my games:
Fed adc chases midlane Karma, eats 3-item Mantra Q to the face and gets oneshot.

Nice writing! Hope you update soon!

You have a very capable vision and a great balance between descriptive text and story text. I think the settings are brisk and efficient and do a good job of putting the reader in the place. Just a couple of suggestions:

1) The overall pacing of the story is very slow at the beginning. Prologue 1 starts after the action happened that put Vi in the hospital- I think it would have been better to actually begin with that action. The readers need a hook at the start to get them into the story, then a swift falling to rising action afterwards to bring up the story proper.

2) You need to establish at the beginning of each writing section from which character's point of view you are writing from and then build the chapter from there. At the beginning of prologue 2 we see points of view from Shen, Akali and Kennen all in rapid succession. It is very confusing to go from how far *both* kennen and akali can see into the fog, into shen's thoughts on akali's attitude. Multiple viewpoints in a single writing section -this type of third-person omniscient is very outdated and hard to pull off- the writing style, when done well, comes off almost biblical in its style. It is easier to do jumps of sections of third-person limited.

Hello! I am one of those shy readers and i have to say that im really enjoyin ur fic!
Also, i'd like to know if you intend to make cait and vi as a couple 3

Amazing story. Thank you for still writing, please dont stop. ; )

Jhin ruined everything. This story sucks.